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A Promise

Commitment

By WindchimePublished about a year ago 1 min read
A Promise
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Who would have thought

I will have my first

Commitment ring in June

Most women dream to be a June bride

To be wed on an 8, 18 or 28

For some culture, belief and tradition

signify infinity which I reckon

Are all couples goal and what they are hoping for

To stay together forever.

To be given a ring of promise

on the 18th of June

Is not even in my wildest imagination

Nor I see it coming in my peripheral vision

It is indeed a blessing

worth celebrating

God works in mysterious ways

He is a God full of surprises.

With this ring I commit to love you forever

To support you in all things that give you laughter

I commit to take care of myself for you

So we can climb mountains,

explore the world and travel to exciting places.

I commit to loving our God, myself and you

Every second of the day

In whatever form I can display

the admiration, adoration and affection I have for you.

Everywhere I look only you I see

I long for you so badly I can swim across the sea

To reach to you and be with you.

I can't wait to see you again

To hold you, touch you, feel your body next to mine

To wake up in the morning seeing you by my side

I can't wait to see our future

To decide where to live

To design our own place

To plan what to do and set goals for the next 6 years

To dream and discover and actualize our potentials

To live the life God has prepared for us

I simply can't wait...

Am thrilled and ecstatic...

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About the Creator

Windchime

Hi! I am yellow.

I love writing poems for myself

and for my friends to enjoy.

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  • Luana Araujoabout a year ago

    This poem captures a deep and committed love... The author talk about their devotion and hope for a future together, saying she is willing to cross to sea to be with her beloved.... Mentioning the next six years hints at a long history and shared dreams...

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Emotional and relatable, commitment is such a wonderful thing, if done to the right person

  • The longing here was so intense and your poem was so wonderful! I loved it!

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