A Poetic Judgemental Day Defense
Loosely Interpretation Of The Rules For The Unfiltered Challenge

Sitting by the conscious stream
I ask, ‘my dear what does it all mean?’
She answers me in ghostly fashion
‘You may want that belt to fasten,’
Pleasantly my dear waved good bye
Tearing up, starting a cry
Since earlier my dear did pass
When I hit the pedal gas
I watched the day’s sun go dark
Resting underneath our special shade tree bark
Persistent my angel grabbed my hand
Up we went, high above my homeland
I still saw the conscious stream
Sunset light glistening and gleam
Escaping any sinful evil fiends
Heaven abound
I could see everything happening in the village town
People doing wrongful things right
Still guarded by their confessional protective excuse knight
Who is putting together a legal defense to fight
But my conscious still does it stream?
Encountering this unexpected unknown destination dream
Due to getting Netflix, Peacock, Apple Plus, using a technical scheme
Entertained judge acknowledges ‘good one’
“I hope you had fun”
Honestly do I pay
And must say
You may realize, my conscious stream
Is very clean
In this garden state, forestry green
I take a bite from forbidden fruit
This is not the time, messenger to shoot
Instead use that romantic arrow, make a pie
Have you determined, I am a heavenly guy
Who just happened to suddenly die
Worrying about my conscious stream
Not having the ability to scream
Instead requesting, ‘open those golden gates
I am tired of this long wait’
To this wonderful place I want to go
Where my conscious stream placidly flows
About the Creator
Marc OBrien
Barry University graduate Marc O'Brien has returned to Florida after a 17 year author residency in Las Vegas. He will continue using fiction as a way to distribute information. Books include "The Final Fence: Sophomores In The Saddle"




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