Shifting into a new you
a choice—
a flame lit within me
that dares to see clearly.
A mind eager to move,
to stride beyond
the weight of yesterday,
to carve life
upon the scale of dreams.
It holds a vision—
a bridge from what is
to what may be,
a spark of magic,
an intuition, rare yet human,
ordinary yet divine.
My mind becomes,
a mind unfolding—
a powerful, magical mind,
a mind reborn
a mind forlorn.
About the Creator
Denise Larkin
A writer with a BA in Arts & Humanities (specialism Creative Writing), studying for an MA in Creative Writing, writes poetry and fictional short stories. The author of Time to Run, The Island of Love, Darkness, and The Non-Human.
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Comments (6)
Oh wow, that was so powerful. Loved it so much!
This is a good one to bring about change in one's living life. Good job.
A beautifully spiritual and deeply crafted poem. Wonderfully worded.
A divinely worded poem. Interesting and mindful.
Beautifully expressed poem.
Outstanding poem.