A Mountain's Room
A Poetry Diary - 12/3/22, 7:55am
Morning icicle mists frisked
The blades of green in this mountain's room.
Hovering amongst the covered
Father Star in the sky and I gaze at You.
Please rise with the sigh of
Frozen mountain's dew,
And let me look right through--
A white landscape of
Hawks first breakfast and
Someone's old lost shoe.
Then a bright light, You rise
And gave me such a
wondrous view.
I'm so honored to be able to
Always capture the
Marvelous, beautiful You! ✨️
-Lar
12/3/22, 7:55am
About the Creator
Laurel Lynn Humble
I aspire to capture & express the
Beauty && Love surrounding me.
Writer. Thinker. Poet.
#chooselovealways
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