A Morning Stroll
Heartbreak City. (NOT AI GENERATED)

Accidentally hit the AI content thing on publish page. No part of this is ai generated.
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Rising from my knees, silently I leave the room
Passing by other’s, quiet as a tomb
Silent haunts accompany me
As I trod a path to destiny
Reaching the exit I step out in the sun
Perhaps a morning jog, maybe a good run
I used to love mornings, dawn’s warm rays
Listening to cicadas as I breathe in the haze
Sit on the porch and sip at some coffee
A drop of milk, sweetened with toffee
In my youth we had a horse named Factor Prime
I’d ride him for hours, laughing the whole time
The day he passed I bawled like a baby
Are there horses in Heaven? Maybe
I climb the steps, wistfully reflective
Bowing my head: Was I so defective?
A necklace of hemp my reward
Here on these oft trod boards
I look over the faces: young, old, female, male
Looking up at me as I end this tale
Will she cry to see me swing?
Will I laugh as my dark soul takes wing?
Beneath tired feet boards shift, fall
As the bottom drops, along with my all
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp




Comments (3)
Well done, Andrew. Although, I was worried for a moment
AI does not those metaphors make Andrew. I believe you, Factor Prime seals the deal. Well punned. penned.
This was so deep and had many layers to it. Loved your poem!