A miner who had my heart ❤️
A fan poem for the novel by KD Lumsden called Secrets of Urthis
Sharpen that blade, hone it to original design
I saw you envelop a new glow on that crying, rusted old metal, and it made my heart singe into a piecemeal that found its way into a singular, full tang
A perfect weight and balance to my heart’s sword. Each step of the process you sent me to new heights, with care and precision and precise direction,
You
Forged something new out of my heart
I saw you with your Jennies,
Walking by in that red blouse
Time seemed to slow down like a twanging metal line, each contact with the vibration made me feel like I was in a new universe
And I caught a glimpse of your sandy hair
And dark, shy eyes,
I heard your friends call out your name,
A wolfish man and a light blue-eyed blonde lady,
“Irwin!”
“Samuel Irwin Miner!”
And it’s fate, I’m sure, that name felt like I’ve known it all my life, known you,
And that’s why I’ve always felt so lonely around large crowds.
My heart sang out more brilliantly than the finest hot steel as I hammer it with
Love,
How could I be so naive?
Seeing you was a treat,
But I am a greasy, too-tall
Gruff grizzly type of man,
I’d like to think that smile and laugh
So sweet and soft,
Was all for me,
But Irwin, where can I lead you?
Where can I find with our song of metals longing to be entwined?
I hope you stay here,
Samuel Irwin Miner,
Long enough to steal my heart
And take me away in your arms.
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Author note: I just recently happened upon this fantasy novel I adored! I am not sure if she is on Vocal, but its by an author called KD Lumsden on Amazon, and her book is Secrets of Urthis! Here is the link, to buy it: click!!
Here is my tribute to the novel. I can’t wait until the next book in the series.
Too bad Irwin didn’t find his man yet! Damn!!
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Comments (5)
Melissa! I absolutely love this. So does Irwin. You're prose is splendid, course so fine. I'm glad you found my story. I'm glad you'll always be mine! I'm okay with poetry, but you're amazing. Thank you for this tribute!
This is breathtaking. Well done!
Some beautiful words there sis
Awww, this was such a wonderful tribute to the novel! Soooo beautifully written!
This is excellent!!