A gaze of amber and gold
captures my chocolate orbs,
pulling me into
a sensual trance.
No words needed,
intertwining embrace
skin to skin,
a sizzling burn
of passion.
Dancing into
a peach sunset,
our giggles echoing
in the breeze.
Love that carries
us through laughter,
and life’s fireballs.
About the Creator
Getting Serious About Comedy (Part I)
If I were asked to remark on my life and the childhood that paved some road leading me to this point, I would have to say something about all the funny people who surrounded me for the last 26,872 days (and counting). Somewhere along that road, I became a big fan of laughter and the comedy that spawns it – and, I mean not only my own laughter, but the laughter of others, some of which I have actually been responsible for inducing.
By John Oliver Smith5 days ago in Humor
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This was a lovely read Daphsam, and I really liked "captures my chocolate orbs," as a way to describe their eyes. Nicely done!
Moments like these are too be treasured
Beautifully captured!
The emotions and visuals are so captivating and relatable.
Awww, this was so sweet! Loved your wonderful poem!
Wonderfully hot and sizzling! A sizzling burn of passion. Well Done!!!
Sweet, sizzling, and wrapped in warmth! This love isn’t just burning—it’s glowing, giggling, and dancing into the sunset. Pure poetry.
Beautiful!
So lovely well done ❤️✍️🏆⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Gorgeous and full of passion! 💕
Well-wrought!
So lovely, Daphne. <3
Just beautiful and I believe that I could see and hear the image move with each word. Good job.