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A lost conclusion, a gained solution.

"When one door closes another door opens; but we often look so long and so regretfully upon the closed door that we do not see the one which has opened for us" - Alexander Graham Bell

By HoaramPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
When one conclusion erupts like a bubble, let a new lesson be shared tomorrow.

There is a child sitting in a classroom.

The lesson has just finished, yet their mind continues to explore the idea of the topic the classroom has discussed for his homework assignment.

The dismissal bell rings, breaking the child’s concentration and their train of thought; They were so enthralled in thinking, they had forgotten to write down what conclusions they had made on their thought exercise, and cannot complete their homework!

Yet, the child would not let this lesson go to waste, knowing that he could turn it into a limerick, and maybe submit that for grades instead of the now lost conclusion; if they couldn’t remember what conclusion they had previously made - they will make a new conclusion with their learned lesson.

The child grabs the closest pencil to them and begins to write:

An idea will bubble, erupt, and disappear,

Yet in a focused understanding, the bubble may hold clear:

But in a fit of rage, a break of concentration, or a tempest of emotion,

The bubble will destroy itself, as heaved with strong convulsions.

True death of our ideas, the conclusions to life that we hold clear and dear:

If we neglect to write or share upon them, just as quick - they disappear.

Read and perceive my message writ' here,

Do not fear mental intrusions that inevitably do appear:

As always "what if the words do not fit the idea"

Or "what if the message is not thought out clear"?

Only follow and record close, 'fore the bubble disappear.

inspirationalchildrens poetry

About the Creator

Hoaram

Just trying to get by doing what I have a passion for. Please consider leaving a tip if anything I say stirs something inside you.

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