You sent a little love today, Oh G-d don't worry I saw it.
Thought the sky split for some spring cleaning
and my umbrella just wouldn't open,
I saw your little love packet today.
I saw your smile through the crack in the sky
as I inched my way through the rain and traffic,
trying to beat the weary clock running double fast today
among the bumper- to- bumper delay
I saw your little love pocket, Oh G-d I felt it inside
though outside was cold gray and angry,
you made me warm and happy today.
About the Creator
T. Licht
I have a love for words and a love to share them.
Enjoy! and thank you for taking the time to read this and maybe if you want subscribe and buy my new poetry book Whispers at Twilight
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By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶a day ago in Petlife
Comments (6)
Absolutely adorable. Too much traffic and a little smile through the clouds!!
A heartwarming piece, beautifully written!
I saw your little love packet today. I saw your smile through the crack in the sky Wow! It's heartwarming...
Beautifully heartfelt!!
Heartwarming and deeply felt. -just saying, when referring to G-d, you always capitalize the You or Him...
A refreshingly content poem. I also particularly enjoyed the rhyme scheme and the lovely image.