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A Language Imperfect

A Poem

By theJustinCarolPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
Photo is of Chana Carol at Monet's garden in Giverny, France. Facebook.com/ChanaCarol

Show me who you are

Not that I don't know

but I could never know enough

I see thoughts in your eyes

expressed through a language imperfect

and I need to know more

Show me who you think I am

Not that I've the right to know

but mirrors can't be trusted

And, if you're going to open up,

you might as well open all the way

fulfilling your need to show more

You think I'm stronger than you

but I'm not

Your strength comes wrapped in graceful ribbons

carrying a weight deceptive in its density

You think me wise while I learn from you

About love

About patience

About peace

You think me brave while I lean on you

On your love

On your patience

On your peace

You show me who you are

I try to see it all

but I could never see enough

Worlds built on words

expressed through a language imperfect

And I need to know more

- Justin Carol

love poems

About the Creator

theJustinCarol

Author. Poet. Songwriter. Prone to strange thoughts.

And, if I ever meet any aliens, I'm denying I'm one of you.

www.justincarol.com

Social Media: @theJustinCarol

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