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A Heart That Was Broken

Even a bad relationship can be good for you

By Colleen Millsteed Published 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
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That special feeling of a connection

The initial excitement and wonder,

Heart skipping a beat, filled with awe

That’s love that you’ve fallen under.

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A few written innuendos just for you

Leaves you questioning the spark,

Are we reading too much into this bliss

Or has Cupid’s arrow hit its mark?

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You go with the flow, albeit with doubt

To find your interest returned, for now,

You open yourself up, maybe foolishly

Sure it’ll be different, you silently vow.

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A few months down the slippery track

And you see their true colours at last,

Promises broken, you’ve been a fool

You’re relegated to their distant past.

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Oh, they tease with a word or even two

Before they disappear in total silence,

Learnt the hard way, but learn you did

Found resilience and removed reliance.

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Yes, it may have only lasted a minute

Discovering you could love once more,

They disappeared, that’s really okay

You are happier than you were before.

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You felt the pain and smiled anyway

As you learned who you really are,

Discovering what you didn’t want

Girl, you survived, you come so far!

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About the Creator

Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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  • Duskshadows3 years ago

    Like someone I used to know

  • John Eva3 years ago

    Wow, this was seriously good. There is a strong heartfelt impact that just takes you on a journey. Thanks for writing, and sharing!

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Beautiful poetry! Loved those last 4 lines!! Great work :)

  • This was something I needed to hear today. Sometimes when old memories comes flooding, I fail to realise I've actually come so far away from all that. This was a very inspirational poem!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Beautifully written with a powerful message.

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