On the cliff so sharp, with a vision so wide,
A day full of magic, with gifts far and wide.
"Mommy! Mommy! When will Santa appear?"
"He’s on his way, sweetie, have no fear!"
"I'll wait 'til he comes, I won’t sleep tonight,
Until my gratitude shines so bright."
"Well, dear, he’ll love that look in your eyes,
But he won’t come 'til you close them tonight."
"Okay, then I’ll pretend, though it’s hard to do!"
Let your worries fade away,
I'll wake you soon,
When Santa comes, beneath the moon.
'Til then, let him rest within your mind,
A peaceful slumber, with dreams so kind.
Years passed, and the girl began to know,
Santa resides, in hearts so warm and kind.
About the Creator
Anwesha
The one who showers every plant, keep trust in that gardener's chant.
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Comments (5)
Beautiful 💙🙏♦️♦️♦️♦️
Absolutely enchanting. Captures the magic of childhood and the spirit of Christmas perfectly. I found your page thanks to Maryam, so feel free to give her a big thank you.
That's wonderful! You've captured the sweet feelings of innocence, hope, and kindness in such a simple yet powerful way. Childhood is truly magical, filled with imagination and heartfelt emotions, and it beautifully showcases that pure excitement and anticipation for Santa.
Beautiful, I loved this!!!
"Well, dear, he’ll love that look in your eyes, But he won’t come 'til you close them tonight." the cutest and wamest couplet that I've read today ❤🦋 The vibe of love, gratitude, and wait for santa was absolutely flawless. One word for it would be: "Sweet" ✨ Great job, Anwesha :D