
The darkness of the night spread all around,
In the house, silence, but in hearts storms did resound.
When on the phone, they heard the voice, once quieted,
Hello, Mom! It's Haley speaking, sorry for being delayed.
Fear, regret, anxiety, and haunting memories took their toll,
The winter couple, trapped, with a heavy soul.
Is she alive, or just a shadow from the past?
They dug at the spot where they had buried her fast.
Haley's bones were found, cold and still,
But the knife was missing, a mystery to fill.
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A/N:- Thanks for taking the time to read this poem
About the Creator
Karan w.
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Author of "The Resonance–Two Together-Lost Forever
All worlds collapse the moment they touch the ground of reality—worlds I once created. Yet I find my bliss in the dissolution of my creations
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Comments (9)
Ohh- this is creepy and well written!
This is quite the mystery for one message from the dead.
This is Amazing!!!
Very well written with excellent syllabic timing and good rhyme scheme. Excellent work!
This poem with thriller/horror themes is very interesting, well done!
Can I join in with the agreement? I agree with Paul and Dharr, this is totally intriguing. Like a movie that keeps you hooked for the mystery ✨🙌
Totally enjoyed this
like Dharr love the level of intrigue you've created! something fishy is afoot!
Oooo, I wonder what actually happened and why. Sooo intriguing!