
It arrives unsolicited —
creased into thirds,
no return address,
just the cold autumnal weight
of a name you almost forgot.
The salutation cuts politely:
"To whom it may concern..."
(it always concerns you.)
condescension folded in passive voice,
where each comma drags across woolen sweaters -
like a hangnail,
and every period threatens to slam
the lid on your coffin.
You read it because you must;
because the ink on the envelope
is bleeding on to your fingertips,
spelling out the contract of broken promises,
each bullet point trying to pierce a nail
through the floorboards of your spine.
It tells you nothing and everything:
that you were never forgiven,
that the paper "knows" the shape of your lies,
that THEY have neither learned nor changed,
and that ink, once spilled, stains skin forever.
There is no need for reply.
Only a margin that shrinks as you read.
Only clauses that try to unravel your veins
with loose, desperate, erratic slashes
making word salad that mocks your pain.
Signed, sealed, and delivered
in Times New Roman;
because even evil has "standards".
About the Creator
Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb
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Comments (5)
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You're one of my favorite writers on Vocal. I love the emotion in your work. Those opening lines, "It arrives unsolicited — / creased into thirds, / no return address, / just the cold autumnal weight" are absolutely amazing and it just gets better from there. Amazing! of a name you almost forgot.
Ai! Ai! Exquisite incision of the soul. Splendid.
Lovely written
I love that final line!