The ruby is there.
I am grateful,
It fell to the ground,
A crack formed,
I am saddened,
I loved my necklace.
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Rebecca Patton
Ever since discovering Roald Dahl, I wanted to be an author who would delight and move her readers through her stories. I also wrote my debut novel, "Of Demons and Deception" on Amazon.
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Oh, this is so clever! As Joe said below, short and sweet. Incredibly effective.💗
Short and sweet, but it makes you think!
Sadly beautiful, great challenge entry. I keep starting these but am then unable to finish