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A blue tie and a scythe

A final rite

By Vito V. ValePublished 3 months ago 1 min read

I dream of myself holding a red rose,

rain whispering against my black clothes.

Above me, a murder of crows.

A cry breaks.

Mom? Dad?

Did I die?

Who’s that man in the blue tie,

holding a scythe?

This can’t be right.

I see the light.

Have I been claimed by the eternal night?

Then let me write

my final rite.

Mother—

thank you for every time I had the flu,

you, cooking that lovely chicken soup.

Father—

thank you for the laces,

for teaching me how to stand in different places.

Thank you both

for pushing me to grow.

I bow to you both,

whether the ground is glass

or snow.

Familysad poetryGratitude

About the Creator

Vito V. Vale

I write about broken minds, monstrous hearts, and the beauty buried between. We all carry things we never name. My stories live in the shadows between choice and consequence.

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