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60 in an 45

hypnotically slipping in and out of consciousness while driving

By prinzton feltusPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
60 in an 45
Photo by George Huffman on Unsplash

i was doing 60 in a 45

no wait it was 35

i’m riding listing to nina but i’m feeling dead

a million thoughts flying through my head

all except DAMN BOY look ahead

I crash poof that’s the end of me

my family cries yet i’ve reached tranquility

i’m really happy but i can wait for y’all to see

maybe it was 25

he says as the brick meets his eyes

I’m not happy, I can’t hear my mommas cries

I wish I can say i was in a rush

or maybe your son was dealing with too much

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