4th of a Slave
A poetic Independence Day through the eyes of a slave
Today is July 4th, 1776 and the nation is getting its fix.
They say from here on out America will be a free society.
But none of this will apply to me.
I’m property to the country and not a citizen.
I learned this from the sheds that they sit us in.
I’m sold around because they don’t believe there’s a human man in me
Dark flesh means they’ll rip you from your family.
As I write this I’ll try not to cry as I express what it was like for me on the 4th of July.
As the fireworks went off the skin on my back was almost ripped off.
I tried to escape and almost had my skin whipped off.
They say this is the day the country is supposed to be free
But those freedoms weren’t meant for me.
Is this the way it was meant to be?
Calling my captors my masters? They’re really just my enemy.
I’m trapped in living hell and I hate it.
Independence Day for me is just another day of being abused and violated.
While the lighter skinned watches the fireworks happy for what they gained
Me and my fellow slaves are still bound in chains.
Some fought for a place of freedom.
Others made it a goal to erase my freedom.
An independent day when I can’t go my independent way. I don’t care what the independent say.
If I try to run for my freedom they’ll be a gunshot for me.
I’m Black. Those 4th of July declarations were not for me.
About the Creator
Joe Patterson
Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.
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Comments (4)
This is such a powerful piece. Thank you for speaking truth & bringing darkness to light. I see you!
This is a story article that needs to go viral as this is what happened in 1776, unfortunately there are people trying to go back to the 1700s . We cannot let them take over
As a descendant of slaves, one of whom ran at 15 to join the Britsih, this gets me right in the feels!
argggghhhh our rotten sad history and you said it so well here.