19 hours on the Pak Business Express
From Karachi to Lahore, just in time for the third Test between Australia and Pakistan

Click-clacking through Karachi
Outer-reaches sprawling wide full of
Kids playing gully cricket
By the train tracks
And only a few stop to wave as the
Pak Business Express
Glides past at square leg, for
Gully cricket is a
Serious business.
_
For the first hour
Then the second and
Into the third
The world outside the window
Remains Karachi
The city
Sprawls on and
Ever on
Until it seems we might never leave
This city sprawling all the way
To Lahore
Perhaps this is all the world is
One sprawling city
Full of kids playing gully cricket.
_
Inside the six-person cabin
Endless cups of tea
Styrofoam aftertaste and two sugars
And Mr Islam (delightful man)
Beaming his wide smile
Delighted in his role as
(Self-appointed) Official Interpreter
For the gora in the cabin
Delighted to practice his
Precise and almost perfect
English
Delighted to laugh over every
Carefully, precisely translated comment.
_
Finally, five or six hours
Into the journey
(At last Karachi disappeared from the window
Several hours before)
During a quiet lull between cups of tea
Mr Islam (with note of quiet concern)
Asks carefully, precisely
Why I am here alone
On the Pak Business Express
And not travelling
With the rest of the team
This whole time he has mistaken me
For an Australian cricketer
And has been quietly concerned
On my behalf
That something went badly wrong
For me
In Karachi and I must laugh
The whole cabin laughs, Mr Islam loudest of all
Delighted to laugh
At his own expense and relieved
Nothing bad had
Happened to me.
_
Eight hours and
The Pak Business Express has been
Swallowed by the night
We stop in some
Nameless town I am too lazy
To look up the name for
And a couple fill the last two spots
In the cabin
The wife’s eyes glare disapproving
At the cabin perhaps it is my imagination
But I imagine the glare is reserved
Mostly for me
She says not a word
The husband seems oddly apologetic
Perhaps he told her he had reserved
A private cabin
Only for themselves.
_
Chicken biryani and another
Styrofoam cup of tea
From the dining cart
Then attempt to sleep
Stretched out as much as I can
On the top bunk berth
Of the cabin.
_
Sometime in the
Small hours
I wake
Rattling over a bridge
Over nothing but sand
Empty of hope like every
Dry season and
Somewhere in the
Black distance beyond
The far riverbank
A fire burns
In the darkness
I drift back to sleep
But my dreams
Bring no meaning.
_
Sunlight creeps through the
Window and bunks
Are tucked away the cabin
Converted again
To six seats
With only three people
Sadly Mr Islam has left us
Sometime during the night
Along with two others
But the cups of tea
Keep coming.
_
It is hour fifteen and
I am pretty tea-ed out
To be honest
But I cannot forget
The advice of the concierge
Of the Dolphin Hotel
Some years before
In Slemani.
_
Coming to and fro
From the hotel
I would pass a group of men
Sitting in the lounge
Passing the time with
Endless cups of tea
They would offer me cup
Every time I passed
And every time I passed I would accept
After the concierge told me
(On day one)
“Roderick, you MUST drink the tea,
You MUST drink the tea, Roderick.”
_
Repeated advice as he was
Concerned
I might not realise the importance
Of accepting tea
And hospitality.
_
Cultural cross-pollination
And common customs of
Tea and hospitality
Between Kurdistan and Pakistan
I’m not sure exist
But
Better to be polite,
To be sure.
_
Nineteen hours
We creak into Lahore
Joints aching
But glad
To arrive and ahead of me
There is
Mutton karahi and chicken boti
And qawwali music and
Conversations in the chai chairs
And television interviews and
Test cricket glory at
Old Gaddafi Stadium
With Amna and Ahmad and Timmy
But that
Is another story
For another time
For now the Pak Business Express
Is already
Creaking rattling click-clacking
Back to Karachi.
About the Creator
Roderick Makim
Read one too many adventure stories as a child and decided I'd make that my life.
I grew up on a cattle station in the Australian Outback and decided to spend the rest of my life seeing the rest of the world.
For more: www.roderickmakim.com


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