14 Broken Angels

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Verse 1
Fourteen broken angels
Are crying in the back garden
Their hearts and hopes and dreams
Shattered, crushed, and scattered low
Laying in the grass like rubble
Where the cold wind will not touch them
Salty tears run in rivulets
Down their hard and stony cheeks
And the demons laugh out yonder
Down a long, shadowless alley
Cheering like they’re champions
After some hard‑earned wicked win
Chorus
Fourteen broken angels
Crying where the roses died
Thunder rolling from the heavens
Like the Earth herself has cried
And the mountains shake in sorrow
For the souls we’ve turned to stone
Fourteen broken angels
Weeping in the garden all alone
Verse 2
Those demons mock our ignorance
Our foolishness and pride
The way we clutch our righteousness
Like pearls at Sunday Mass
Thinking whispered prayers will save us
While we never lift a finger
Never dirty up our hands
To heal the wounds we’ve made
And still the angels tremble
In the weeds behind the house
While the sky begins to rumble
With a rage we can’t outrun
Chorus
Fourteen broken angels
Crying where the roses died
Thunder rolling from the heavens
Like the Earth herself has cried
And the mountains shake in sorrow
For the souls we’ve turned to stone
Fourteen broken angels
Weeping in the garden all alone
Bridge
Thunder from the Divine
Crashes like a warning
Hot as molten lava
From the heart of sacred ground
Seeming to cry out,
“Just how broken must you be
Before you finally wake
And see what you have done to Me”
Final Verse
Fourteen broken angels
Still crying in the back garden
Their hearts and hopes and dreams
Shattered, crushed, and left to bleed
Salty tears run in rivulets
Down their hard and stony faces
While the night wind carries sorrow
Through the holler, through the pines
Final Chorus
Fourteen broken angels
Crying where the roses died
Thunder rolling from the heavens
Like the Earth herself has cried
And the mountains shake in sorrow
For the souls we’ve turned to stone
Fourteen broken angels
Weeping in the garden all alone
About the Creator
Julie O'Hara - Author, Poet and Spiritual Warrior
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