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11/14/21

It's been too long

By Daniel KPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Time Capsule Haiku Challenge
11/14/21
Photo by Fred Russo on Unsplash

Days feel like seasons

the acorn of missing you

made an oak of me

heartbreaklove poemsnature poetry

About the Creator

Daniel K

I write love poems about the girl who has a hold over my heart and my life in such a way that neither are my own anymore. The girl I would choose over and over and over again. I love her, and that is the beginning and end of everything.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Badhan Senabout a year ago

    So Fantastic Oh My God❤️Brilliant & Mind Blowing Your Story ❤️ Please Read My Stories and Subscribe Me

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    Congratulations!

  • Denelsia Walker3 years ago

    Congratulations 🎉

  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    Nicely done, congrats

  • Lena Beana3 years ago

    This is stunning. I think this is more than runner up material. First place so far to me!

  • Loryne Andawey3 years ago

    Oh, this was heartbreaking. That last line twist is exactly how a haiku is done. Congratulations on placing in this challenge. ❤'d and subscribed 😄🤗

  • Rachel M.J3 years ago

    So clever! I adore this

  • Deidra Darst3 years ago

    Very profound

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    Wow, what a powerful expression of loss! Great work!

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