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The Fall of Pride, the Rise of Humility

A story of two brothers — where pride withered, and humility bloomed.

By Kaleem Ullah Published 8 months ago 3 min read

In the peaceful village of Noorpur, two brothers lived side by side — Kamal and Jamal. Though they shared the same blood, their hearts and minds were worlds apart.

Kamal, the elder brother, was a man of means. He owned land, had received the best education, and was known for his intelligence and sharp business sense. But along with his success came a dangerous flaw — pride. Kamal saw himself as above everyone else. He walked with his chin high and spoke as if the village was beneath him. In his eyes, his wealth gave him the right to judge, to belittle, and to rule.

Jamal, on the other hand, was quiet and humble. He was not as educated, nor as wealthy, but his character was gentle, and his heart was kind. He worked as a farmer on a small patch of land and lived a simple life. Where Kamal looked down on people, Jamal treated everyone with the same respect — whether they were rich landlords or barefoot laborers.

Kamal was known for his arrogance. People often came to him in times of need, but he would either turn them away or help them in a way that made them feel humiliated. “You are nothing without me,” he would say, puffing up his chest. “This village survives because of me.”

Jamal never made such claims. Despite having little, he never let anyone go hungry from his door. If someone asked for help, he gave whatever he could, often saying, “It is not mine to keep — what I have is a blessing to be shared.”

Then came a severe drought. The skies dried up, the earth cracked, and the crops failed. Noorpur, once full of green fields and smiling faces, became a village of despair. Wells ran dry. People went hungry.

The villagers turned to Kamal, whose granaries were full. They begged him to share his grain, even just a little.

Kamal refused. “This food is for my workers and my profit. If you want it, pay. Otherwise, leave.”

Broken and hopeless, the villagers left empty-handed. But Jamal couldn’t bear their suffering. He opened his modest home and shared the little he had. When someone asked, “What about you?” he simply smiled and said, “The same God who fed me yesterday will feed me tomorrow. True strength lies in humility, not in hoarding.”

Word of Jamal’s kindness spread. Soon, a relief team from the city arrived to assess the village’s condition. When they asked who had helped the people survive, every voice echoed the same name — Jamal.

The officials met him and were moved by his sincerity and compassion. They offered him a chance to work with a humanitarian organization, helping more villages like his.

Kamal was furious when he heard this. “They honor him? A poor farmer? While I, the wealthiest man in the region, am forgotten?”

But the truth was clear. Pride had isolated Kamal. Humility had lifted Jamal in people’s hearts.

Not long after, Kamal fell ill. Weak and alone, he realized how few truly cared for him. No one came — except Jamal.

Kamal looked at him with teary eyes. “Why are you here? I mocked you. I never respected you.”

Jamal sat by his side and said gently, “Because our mother taught us that true power is in forgiveness and service, not in pride.”

Kamal wept. “Forgive me, brother. I see now — my arrogance was my greatest weakness.”

Jamal smiled and took his hand. “Forgiveness is free, and peace comes when we choose humility.”

From that day on, Kamal changed. He gave more, spoke less, and served others with a quiet heart. He would often say:

“I had everything — but I only found peace when I embraced humility.”


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Moral:
Arrogance may bring short-lived control, but only humility earns lasting love and respect. In the end, true strength isn’t about standing above others — it’s about lifting them up with grace.
True strength lies in humility, not in arrogance.

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