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Thirty-Three Stones and a Shore

A Tale the Waves Whisper Again and Again

By HelenePublished 7 months ago 3 min read

Scene One: Silence of the Morning

It was a golden morning. The sea, vast and silent, stretched endlessly, as if it longed to speak but couldn't find the words. A lone traveler stepped onto the shore, shoes in hand, bare feet sinking slightly into the soft sand. Each footprint was left behind with intention, yet the next wave swept it away without asking.

His name was Ayaz.

On his shoulder hung an old canvas satchel. His eyes carried a haze, not from sleep, but from something deeper — like he was trying to forget what his heart wouldn’t allow.

This particular bend in the coastline had always called to him. The shore curved like a quiet arm wrapping the sea, and scattered along that embrace were thirty-three stones — not thirty-two, not thirty-four — always thirty-three. They seemed to wait for him, every time.

Some stones were smooth as glass, some jagged like broken thoughts. Others were flat, light, perfect for skipping — but Ayaz never skipped them. He touched them. Counted them. Studied their positions.

He believed these thirty-three stones held stories. Maybe not of the world, but of his world.

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Scene Two: The First Time

Years ago, Ayaz was just a boy chasing shadows and saltwater. He had followed a seagull one morning to this very place, and that was when he first saw them — thirty-three stones laid out like a puzzle, random yet deliberate. He had no idea who placed them or why, but he felt something then: a pull.

That night, he dreamed of the stones. Each one glowed and whispered a word. He remembered only a few:

“Loss”

“Joy”

“Silence”

“Time”

“Truth”

When he woke, his fingers were covered in sand.

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Scene Three: Return After the Storm

Now, years later, he was back. Much had changed — cities had grown louder, people had faded, and Ayaz himself was heavier with things unsaid.

He knelt before the stones.

And again, he counted: one... two... twenty-nine... thirty... thirty-three.

Still there. Still waiting.

He reached into his satchel and pulled out a journal — weathered, its spine cracked from years of secrets. Each page held a memory. But he wasn't here to write more memories.

He was here to leave them.

For each stone, he whispered something and turned a page. Then he tore it out and set it under that stone.

One by one:

A letter he never sent to his mother.

A poem written during a heartbreak.

A sketch of a girl he once saw reading alone on a train.

A crumpled map of a place he never reached.

Each paper found its place beneath the stones, as if the shore had been waiting to archive his life.

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Scene Four: The Stranger

Just as he placed the thirty-third paper, he heard footsteps. Slow, hesitant.

A girl, maybe twenty, barefoot like him, holding a camera.

"Are you leaving them here?" she asked.

He nodded.

She looked at the stones, then at him. "I’ve come here since I was small. I always wondered why these stones never moved."

"Because they listen," Ayaz said.

She sat down beside him, placed her camera between them.

"Can I leave something too?"

Ayaz smiled. “They belong to no one. That’s why they belong to everyone.”

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Scene Five: The Meaning of Thirty-Three

The girl asked, “Why thirty-three?”

Ayaz shrugged. "Maybe it’s just a number. Or maybe... it’s the number of things one must let go to be free."

She looked thoughtful. Then slowly, she opened her camera, took out a tiny photograph of her and her grandfather, and placed it under the flattest stone.

The sea sighed.

And Ayaz knew, the ritual would continue — not just his, but others'. The shore would remember.

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Scene Six: Evening and Echo

As the sun began to set, Ayaz stood up. He didn’t take anything back. Not the pages, not the memories. He had come full circle.

The stones remained. Thirty-three. Watching. Holding.

He walked away, his footprints soft, almost ghostlike.

The girl stayed, now counting the stones herself.

And behind them, the sea whispered its old, eternal song:

“Let go... let go... let go...”

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About the Creator

Helene

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