The Shadow in the Veil
When love turns deadly, even a wedding veil can't hide the truth.

The air was thick with the scent of jasmine and anticipation. My friend, Faisal, stood at the threshold of a new life, a joyous tremor in his voice as he greeted guests. It was his wedding day, a day we had all looked forward to, filled with the promise of laughter, music, and the beautiful union of two souls.
As his closest friend, I was there from the early hours, watching him transform from a nervous groom into a beaming beacon of happiness. The baraat assembled, a vibrant procession of cars bedecked with flowers, their horns honking in a symphony of celebration. The dhol resonated with a primal beat, urging us forward, each step a testament to the joyous occasion. Faisal, adorned in a cream-colored sherwani, his face alight with an almost childlike glee, led the charge. We danced, we sang, we revelled in the collective euphoria, oblivious to the cruel twist of fate that awaited us.
The bride’s house was a kaleidoscope of colours. Fairy lights twinkled like captured stars, draping the entire edifice in a magical glow. The women of the household, adorned in their finest attire, stood at the entrance, their smiles radiating warmth and welcome. The moment arrived – the groom was to be received, and soon, the bride would make her grand entrance.
Then, she appeared.
From within the house, a hush fell. There she was, clad in a magnificent crimson lehenga, intricately embroidered with gold zari. Her face, partially veiled, was a vision of serene beauty. Murmurs of admiration rippled through the crowd. She walked slowly, gracefully, her every movement radiating an ethereal charm. Faisal’s eyes were fixed on her, adoration clear in their depths. It was a sight that could melt even the coldest of hearts.
She reached the small, ornate stage set up for the initial rituals. As she sat beside Faisal, a wave of palpable happiness washed over the gathering. The initial prayers began, the rhythmic chants of the cleric filling the air.
Then, it happened.
A gasp, sharp and sudden, tore through the solemn silence. The bride, who had moments ago been radiating life, slumped forward, her head falling onto Faisal's shoulder. A collective intake of breath echoed through the stunned crowd. For a fleeting second, we thought she had fainted, overcome by the heat or the emotion of the moment. But then, a shudder ran through her slender frame, and her hand, which had been resting delicately on her lap, clenched into a fist before going limp.
Faisal, his smile vanishing, tried to steady her. "Are you alright?" he whispered, concern etched on his face. But there was no response. Her face, now fully visible, was a pale canvas, her lips tinged with an alarming bluish hue. Her eyes, open but vacant, stared blankly into the distance.
Panic erupted. Women shrieked. Men rushed forward. The joyful chaos of moments before was replaced by a terrifying, suffocating silence, broken only by frantic whispers and gasps of horror. Someone screamed for a doctor. Within minutes, a local physician, who was also a guest, was at her side, his face grim as he conducted a hasty examination.
His pronouncement was chilling.
"She's gone," he said, his voice barely a whisper, yet it resounded like a thunderclap in the horrified silence. "She's… she's no more."
The words hung in the air, cold and unforgiving. Faisal let out a guttural cry, a sound of pure agony that tore at my very soul. The dream had shattered, mercilessly, brutally, right before our eyes. The baraat, which had arrived with such pomp and glory, now stood frozen in a tableau of despair.
The initial shock soon gave way to a frenzy of questions. How? Why? She was young, vibrant, full of life. It made no sense. As the police were called, a pall of suspicion and grief descended upon the house. The festive colours now seemed mockingly bright against the dark canvas of tragedy.
Days turned into a blur of grief and investigation. The post-mortem results were shocking. She had been poisoned. A fast-acting, potent poison. The police launched a full-scale inquiry, interviewing everyone who had been in contact with her, searching for motives, for clues. The wedding was a crime scene, the joyous occasion now a haunting memory.
As the investigation progressed, a name began to surface. A name that brought with it a tale of obsessive love and devastating heartbreak.
A man named Rizwan.
Rizwan was a distant cousin of the bride, someone who had been a quiet, almost invisible presence at family gatherings. But beneath that unassuming exterior lay a heart consumed by an unrequited, fiery passion. He had loved her for years, silently, desperately. He had confessed his feelings to her once, years ago, only to be gently but firmly rejected. She had seen him as a friend, nothing more.
He couldn't accept it. His love, twisted and distorted by rejection, festered into a dangerous obsession. He watched her from afar, his hope dwindling with each passing year. When news of her engagement to Faisal reached him, something inside him snapped. The thought of her with another man was a torment he could not bear. His love, once a source of yearning, transformed into a venomous possessiveness.
If he couldn't have her, no one could.
The police meticulously pieced together the fragments of his desperate plan. He had meticulously researched poisons, opting for one that would be difficult to detect immediately, yet swift in its action. He had gained access to the bride's room earlier in the day, under the guise of offering well wishes. In a moment of chilling resolve, he had found an opportune moment to slip the poison into her drink, or perhaps a small sweet she was offered. The precise method remained a point of conjecture, but the outcome was tragically clear.
He had watched, hidden amongst the crowd, as she walked towards Faisal, radiant and oblivious to her impending doom. He had witnessed the beautiful vision of her sitting beside his rival, a macabre satisfaction perhaps mingling with his twisted grief. When she collapsed, his dark deed was done. He had taken her life, not out of malice towards her, but out of a perverse, consuming love that could not tolerate sharing. He believed he was saving her from a life he deemed unacceptable, a life without him.
Rizwan was apprehended, his confession chillingly detached, laced with a misguided sense of righteousness. He claimed he loved her too much to see her marry someone else. His love, he argued, was purer, stronger. But his actions were nothing short of murder, a betrayal of love itself.
The wedding, meant to be a celebration of love and new beginnings, became a stark reminder of love's darker side. Faisal, shattered, retreated into a world of profound grief. The memory of his bride, so vibrant one moment and gone the next, haunted his waking hours and tormented his dreams. The festive sounds of the dhol and the joyous laughter of the baraat were replaced by the haunting echoes of a love poisoned, a life stolen, and a dream forever shattered by the shadow of an unbearable obsession.
The veil that had once promised a beautiful future now seemed to shroud a tragic secret, a love story twisted into a tale of ultimate betrayal.
About the Creator
Noman Afridi
I’m Noman Afridi — welcome, all friends! I write horror & thought-provoking stories: mysteries of the unseen, real reflections, and emotional truths. With sincerity in every word. InshaAllah.


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