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The Salt-Kissed Call

A phantom memory of sea-spray and ancient stones clawed at Leo's gut, a place he'd never seen but knew in his bones.

By HAADIPublished 12 days ago 4 min read

Leo worked the line, same as his old man, same as his old man's old man. The smell of hot metal and industrial cleaner was the scent of his life, stuck in his throat like a swallowed lie. Six days a week, the thrum of the machines vibrated up through his worn boots, rattling his teeth, shaking loose something deep inside him. It wasn't just boredom. It was an ache, sharp and persistent, for somewhere else. A specific somewhere, even though he couldn't name it, hadn't a clue where it might be. He just knew it. Knew it like a scar on his own hand.

Sometimes, it came to him clear as day, a snapshot behind his eyes: a grey sky heavy with rain, the wind whipping off a furious ocean, and cliffs, jagged black teeth against the churn. And on those cliffs, not just rock, but something built, something old. Stone circles, crumbling walls, overgrown and forgotten. He’d feel the bite of the salt on his lips, the spray cold on his cheeks, the vast, empty roar of the sea swallowing every other sound. He’d never been anywhere like that. Not in this grimy city. Not even in pictures, though he'd hunted through library books and old travel magazines, desperate for a match.

The feeling wasn't a wish; it was a memory, a ghost of a life unlived. A homesickness for a home he’d never seen. His mates, they just laughed. "Leo's off in his head again, building castles in the air." Terry, who clocked in beside him for ten years, always with the same tired joke. Leo would just grunt, tighten his grip on the wrench, and pretend the sound of the stamping machine was the crash of waves against ancient rock.

But the ache wouldn't leave him. It grew, a splinter under the skin. He started saving, first just spare change, then real money. Every extra shift, every overtime hour, every cheap microwave meal instead of a pub burger. It was slow, agonizing work. The numbers on his savings account barely crept up. He wanted to scream sometimes, wanted to kick a hole through the cheap drywall of his rented room. The city felt like a cage, the noise a constant taunt, reminding him of what he wasn't, where he wasn't.

He picked up a second job, evenings, washing dishes at a greasy spoon. His hands got raw, knuckles cracked, but the stack of bills in his drawer grew. He studied maps, not looking for anywhere specific, just tracing coastlines, islands, places far from the grey sprawl of his existence. He read books about ancient civilizations, about solitary monks on remote isles, about storms and shipwrecks. He pieced together snippets, trying to give form to the phantom place that haunted his waking hours.

His family, they saw it in his eyes, the hollowed-out look. His mother would ask, her voice brittle with worry, "You eating enough, Leo? You look thin." He’d nod, force a smile. Tell her he was fine. He couldn’t explain the hunger inside him, not for food, but for that unknown horizon. How could he tell her he was saving for a ghost, a feeling, a memory that wasn't even his?

Then came the blow. The factory announced layoffs. Leo’s section. Gone. Just like that. The floor went cold beneath him. Panic, raw and burning, surged. All that work, all that scrimping, gone. He spent a week in a stupor, drinking cheap beer, staring at the peeling paint on his ceiling. The phantom place in his mind felt like a cruel joke, a taunt from a universe that didn't care for dreamers. What was the point? He was stuck. He was always going to be stuck.

But one night, drunk and miserable, he stumbled across an old documentary on a forgotten channel. Wild, craggy islands off the coast of Ireland. The camera panned, slow, deliberate. And there it was. Not identical, not a perfect match, but close. So close it stopped his breath in his chest. A weathered stone archway, built by hands long dead, looking out over a furious, churning sea. The same stark grey sky, the same biting wind he felt in his imagined memories. A jolt, like electricity, shot through him. It wasn’t a dream. It wasn't just in his head. Somewhere, something like it existed.

The next morning, his head pounding, he got up. He counted what little money he had left after the layoffs and the booze. Not enough for a ticket, not yet. But it wasn't zero. It was a start. He started walking, found a construction site hiring day laborers. No questions asked. Heavy lifting, long hours, but cash in hand. He worked until his muscles screamed, until he felt like his bones might crack. He thought of the stone masons who built those ancient walls, how they must have sweated and strained. He thought of the wind, the salt, the limitless horizon. He thought of home, the real one, the one waiting for him, somewhere out there, calling to him across the vast, indifferent ocean.

He bought the cheapest one-way ticket he could find, a ferry from a grimy port, then a bus, then another ferry. It took everything he had, every last cent, every ounce of his will. He stood on the deck, the cold wind tearing at his threadbare jacket, watching the grey swell of the Atlantic. The air tasted of salt and something else. Something like possibility. The distant landmass was just a smudge on the horizon, but his gut clenched, a familiar, aching pull. He couldn't see the cliffs yet, couldn't make out any ancient stones. But he could feel it. Feel the raw, wild promise of it. "Almost there," he whispered, the words snatched by the wind.

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