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The Last Ember

When the fire dies, so does hope.

By Qaisar JanPublished 9 months ago 5 min read

In a world where warmth had become myth and sunlight a forgotten language, silence reigned like a tyrant. The sky was a permanent bruise, heavy with leaden clouds that had not parted in generations. The great cities of men—once citadels of light and laughter—lay buried beneath glaciers and ash, their towers broken, their libraries devoured by time and snow. Nature had reclaimed her dominion with vengeance, and mankind had become a whisper on the wind.

And yet, somewhere in that vast, frozen oblivion, a single ember remained.

His name was Elian.

Born beneath the ruins of Eldwyn, a crumbling subterranean enclave carved into the bones of ancient mountains, Elian was raised not in comfort but in cold defiance. The people of Eldwyn survived, not by strength, but by memory. They were the last keepers of stories, of songs, of symbols etched in soot on stone walls. And Elian—restless, sharp-eyed, and untamed—was their youngest spark, a child whose dreams burned even when the world did not.

His grandmother, Maelen, was the last Flamekeeper—a title now worn more out of respect than relevance. She would gather the children in the evenings, huddled beside the last working hearth, and whisper legends into their ears: tales of fire that could sing, rivers that ran warm, skies that bled gold at dusk, and a world where light did not need to be stolen. But most sacred of all was the legend of the First Flame, a gift from the gods that once warmed all of creation, and which could be rekindled—if one had the courage to find its last ember.

“The flame,” she’d say, her voice rasping like dry leaves, “does not belong to the weak. It tests the heart, torments the mind, and consumes all who doubt its power. But if you endure—truly endure—it will awaken.”

When Maelen died, a part of Eldwyn died with her. But Elian did not let her stories perish. He etched them into his memory, tattooed them into his resolve. For within her ashes, he found something wrapped in silk—a sliver of warmth no larger than a fingernail, glowing faintly, pulsing like a heart trying not to forget how to beat. The last ember.

With it came the unbearable weight of purpose.

“I must leave,” he told the Council, their faces drawn with fear and fatigue. “The Flame must be reignited. This ember is our last chance.”

They called him mad. Foolish. Delusional. They begged him to stay—to forget the old world and accept their fate. But Elian’s heart refused silence. In the dead of night, he wrapped the ember in cloth and pressed it against his chest. It was barely warm, yet it throbbed with impossible potential.

Thus began his odyssey across the Frostwastes—a treacherous expanse of icebound nightmares and glacial labyrinths. The land itself was alive with malice. Winds shrieked with voices of the long-dead. The sky wept ice knives. Elian trudged through frost deeper than thought, his breath crystallizing midair, his every step haunted by specters of cold.

And yet, he endured.

On the seventh day, he came upon the Shattered Pines, a forest of trees long petrified into obsidian by storms that had once carried fire and brimstone. The branches hung like claws, and beneath them slithered whispers—tempting, tormenting.

“You cannot save them,” they hissed. “The flame is fiction. Turn back.”

But Elian’s will was ironclad. He pressed on.

Weeks passed. His rations withered. His strength waned. But the ember remained—constant, insistent, defying death with its delicate pulse. When Elian collapsed atop the Weeping Glacier, delirium clawed at his mind. He dreamed of Maelen’s voice, not in warning, but in song. A lullaby of warmth, of rebirth.

He awoke in darkness, cocooned in silence.

At last, he had reached the Cradle of Ashes, a basin once said to be the heart of the world’s warmth. Now, it was a graveyard of pyres long extinguished, stone altars covered in frost, and pillars etched with the language of forgotten gods. The air shimmered—not with heat, but anticipation.

In the center lay the Dormant Flame, a circular pit surrounded by obsidian shards and bound by ethereal chains—each inscribed with ancient runes warning, Only the worthy shall awaken the Flame.

Elian stepped forward, the ember in his hands trembling, as though it, too, felt the burden of history.

But the moment he knelt, shadows erupted from the pyre’s edges. They coalesced into Wraiths of the Cold, spectral sentinels with hollow eyes and voices like shattering ice. They did not attack with blades or teeth—they attacked with memory.

They showed Elian visions of his people starving, of Maelen dying alone, of his journey ending in futility. They spoke not lies, but truths. Cruel, unyielding truths.

“You are not enough.”

“You will fail.”

“There is no fire. Only frost.”

Elian wept—but he did not yield. He placed the ember on the cold ashes and whispered the invocation his grandmother had once spoken: “By spark, by soul, by sacrifice—let fire find root again.”

Nothing happened.

The ember dimmed.

For one agonizing heartbeat, Elian believed the shadows.

But then—it happened.

A tremor.

A pulse.

The ember flared, blinding and wild, its warmth flooding the basin like the first breath of dawn. The wraiths shrieked, recoiling, evaporating into steam as flame consumed their falsehoods. The runes ignited in radiant orange. The obsidian cracked, shedding shards of ice as molten light surged from the pit.

Fire—true fire—was reborn.

The Cradle of Ashes became a beacon, visible even through the choking clouds. The warmth spread outward like a heartbeat, thawing glaciers, cracking ice shelves, stirring the winds. Snow turned to rain. Ice turned to soil.

Elian collapsed beside the pyre, his body broken but his spirit alight.

He had done it.

The ember had become an inferno.

A season later, when the clouds parted for the first time in generations, the people of Eldwyn looked up and wept. The sun—dim but real—bathed their faces. And from the southern mountains, a figure emerged, cloaked in smoke and gold.

Elian had returned.

He bore fire in his hands and spring in his shadow. Behind him trailed warmth, and life, and stories yet to be told.

They crowned him not as king, but as Kindler, the one who reignited the soul of the world.

And though his journey had ended, the flame he sparked would burn in the hearts of generations. No longer would children be raised in silence. No longer would hope be a whisper. The world had changed—not because fate willed it so, but because one man defied the cold with conviction.

And so, The Last Ember became the first blaze of a new dawn.

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Qaisar Jan

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