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"The King’s Blind Trust"

"The King’s Blind Trust When loyalty hides a dagger and wisdom wears a mask."

By Basit AliPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

In the vast and fertile kingdom of Virelia, King Ardan ruled with a noble heart and a heavy crown. He was a warrior in his youth, earning scars that turned into legends, and a leader in his reign, admired by his people for his courage and kindness. But even a mighty lion needs guidance, and for Ardan, that guidance came from his most trusted minister, Velric.

Velric had been by Ardan's side since the early days of his reign. Calm, wise, and composed, he was known in the court as the king's shadow, never far behind, never overstepping his place. His counsel was considered near prophetic, and Ardan rarely made decisions without his input. From the outside, it appeared to be the perfect alliance: a powerful king and a wise advisor.

But as the years passed, power subtly shifted. Velric's voice grew louder in the royal court, his influence spreading through the kingdom like roots under soil. He placed his own men in key positions, quieted those who questioned him, and made enemies disappear with words instead of swords. Ardan, blinded by trust and past loyalty, saw only the surface of things.

"He is the pillar of my throne," the king often said. "Without him, this kingdom would crumble."

Yet, within the palace walls, fear began to brew. Whispers among the guards, sideways glances among the council, and unease among the people. Taxes grew heavier, dissent was crushed quietly, and Velric's hand seemed to be in everything. Still, Ardan saw none of it, for Velric ensured the king heard only what he wished to hear.

One day, a dusty traveler arrived at the capital. He was no ordinary wanderer but a scholar named Eland, who had once served in a distant province of Virelia. He requested an audience with the king but was denied repeatedly. Finally, disguised as a street performer, he found his way into the royal gardens, where Ardan strolled in solitude.

Eland revealed himself and knelt. "My king, I bring you truth wrapped in danger. Hear me before it is too late."

Ardan, amused and intrigued, allowed him to speak.

"Years ago, I was a scribe in Velric’s assigned province. I saw how he ruled in your name, with cruelty masked as law and ambition disguised as loyalty. Your people starve while he grows richer. Those who speak out vanish."

At first, Ardan’s eyes flashed with anger. "You speak ill of the man who saved this kingdom more times than I can count."

But Eland held out parchments—records, letters, and confessions smuggled from various corners of the land. Proof of Velric’s schemes. Ardan took them silently.

That night, the king sat alone in his chamber, reading until dawn. Doubt, a stranger to his heart, settled in. He summoned no one. He watched. He listened. And slowly, the blindfold began to fall.

Over weeks, Ardan set quiet tests. Orders were given in secret, decisions made without Velric’s knowledge. And each time, Velric moved quickly to intercept, manipulate, or contradict. The mask was slipping.

Then came the final test.

Ardan announced he would visit a distant village—one reportedly thriving, according to Velric's reports. But what he found was misery: starving children, overworked laborers, and a local leader terrified to speak. The truth shattered what little trust remained.

Returning to the palace, Ardan devised a quiet plan. One night, he summoned the court, and in the presence of nobles and advisors, he spoke:

"For years, I have ruled, believing loyalty was unbreakable. I was wrong."

He turned to Velric. "Your wisdom once guided me. But now, it seeks to control me. You have ruled in my name but not with my heart."

Velric, caught off guard, tried to deny it. But the evidence was presented, and Eland stepped forward with witness after witness. The court fell silent.

The punishment was not death, for Ardan believed even betrayal deserved dignity. Velric was stripped of his title and exiled from the kingdom.

In the days that followed, Ardan visited the provinces himself, listened to his people, and rebuilt the council with those who spoke truth, not flattery.

From that day on, a new saying spread in Virelia:

"The crown may shine in gold, but its strength lies in the eyes that question and the ears that hear."

And King Ardan, wiser now, ruled not just with a loyal heart but with open eyes.

Moral: Never let loyalty blind you to truth, for even shadows can grow darker than night.

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