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The Garden Beyond the Gate

Some doors only open for those who still believe in miracles.

By Atif khurshaidPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

No one ever spoke about the old forest at the edge of town.

Children were warned away. Teenagers dared each other to approach it on moonless nights. Adults simply avoided it, pretending it didn’t exist.

But to Mara, the forest was a living thing, full of quiet songs and forgotten magic.

She first found the gate on her seventeenth birthday.

It was a hot, restless afternoon. Mara wandered beneath the whispering trees, her fingers trailing along the bark. She didn't know what she was looking for until she found it: an ancient wrought-iron gate tucked between two leaning oaks, almost invisible beneath layers of ivy.

The gate wasn’t locked. It simply... waited.

She pressed a hand against it. The metal was warm, as if it had a heartbeat.

On impulse, she pushed it open.

The moment she stepped through, the world changed.

Sunlight thickened into a golden haze. The air was sweeter, rich with the scent of wildflowers. Before her stretched a garden unlike any she'd ever seen — plants twisted in impossible shapes, their colors so vivid they almost hurt to look at. Trees with silver leaves whispered in languages she didn’t know. Strange, delicate creatures like living sparks darted between the blossoms.

Mara gasped, wonder blooming in her chest.

At the center of the garden stood a fountain — not of water, but of light, pouring endlessly upward into the sky.

Sitting on the edge of the fountain was a boy around her age. His hair caught the light like spun gold, and his smile was easy and warm.

"You found it," he said, as if they'd been waiting forever.

"Found what?" Mara breathed.

"The Garden of Echoes," he said. "A place for the ones who remember what the world forgot."

He told her his name was Eli. He explained that the garden wasn’t just a refuge — it was a heart, beating quietly beneath the skin of the world. It fed hope and wonder back into the gray places where dreams had faded.

"But it’s fading," Eli said, his smile slipping. "Less and less people find it. The garden shrinks every year."

Mara knelt in the grass, running her fingers over the soft petals of a flower that shimmered like a tiny galaxy.

"Why me?" she asked.

"Because you still believe in what you can’t see."

For what felt like hours, they wandered the paths together. Eli showed her trees that grew music instead of fruit, ponds where wishes drifted like lily pads, vines that wove themselves into shapes when you sang to them.

Mara laughed more that day than she had in years. She forgot the heavy world outside — the endless responsibilities, the grinding routine, the ache of wanting to belong somewhere she never quite fit.

As the golden light began to dim into twilight, Eli grew quiet.

"You can't stay," he said gently. "Not yet."

"Why?"

"Because the garden needs you out there. Your wonder... your heart. It feeds this place even from afar."

Mara’s throat tightened. "Will I ever find my way back?"

Eli smiled, sad and bright all at once. "If you carry this place inside you, the gate will always open for you."

He reached into the fountain of light and withdrew a small seed, glowing faintly in his hand.

"This is yours," he said, placing it in her palm. "Plant it where the world seems darkest. It will grow."

Reluctantly, Mara stepped back through the gate.

The moment she did, the forest returned — ordinary, green, and real. The gate behind her creaked closed, then shimmered until it blended perfectly with the trees.

The seed pulsed warmly in her pocket.

Years passed. Mara grew older. The world, at times, tried to grind her spirit down with worry and sorrow.

But she never forgot the Garden of Echoes.

Whenever she felt the grayness closing in, she planted tiny acts of wonder — a community garden in a neglected park, a mural on a blank alley wall, a story whispered to a child who still believed in magic.

And every time, just when she thought the garden might be lost forever, she'd find herself walking through some unexpected doorway — a hidden path in a library, an alley washed in golden light — and there it would be again.

Waiting.

Alive.

Growing stronger.

Because somewhere deep inside her, she still carried the magic.

She always would.

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