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Beneath the Olive Tree

A young boy’s journey to faith in a land torn by silence and memory.

By muqaddas shuraPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

The olive tree had stood for centuries.

Its gnarled roots twisted through the soil of Palestine, deep and unmoved, even as everything around it changed — walls, soldiers, silence. It stood at the edge of a small village where few things remained untouched, and fewer still remembered.

But Yusuf remembered.

He was twelve, born in a land where bedtime stories were told in whispers, and bedtime prayers were said beneath the breath. His father had been taken when he was five — “detained” was the word the grown-ups used, but Yusuf didn’t know what that meant. Only that his father's voice had disappeared, like the adhan that no longer echoed from the old masjid dome.

Yusuf's grandmother, Tayta Mariam, was the keeper of stories. She told him of prophets and prayers, of the Quran hidden in her chest drawer, of a time when men gathered for Fajr with wet hair and open hearts. Every evening, she would sit beneath the olive tree and tell him, “This tree has heard more duas than you can count.”

Yusuf once asked her, “Do you think Allah still listens here?”

She smiled, sad and soft. “Allah always listens. It’s us who forget how to speak.”

One afternoon, soldiers came and shouted near the masjid. Children were told to go inside. Yusuf, curious and stubborn, stayed behind the tree and watched. One of the soldiers climbed the minaret and pulled down the speaker.

That night, the village was quieter than usual. No one spoke. Even Tayta Mariam sat silently on her rug, hands resting on her lap, the Quran unopened beside her.

“Why don’t we say the adhan?” Yusuf asked. “We can whisper it, like you tell the stories.”

She looked at him, eyes deep with years. “Whispered adhan won’t wake the soul. It must be heard.”

“But then let me call it. Outside.”

Mariam froze. “No, habibi. You must never—”

But he was already halfway out the door, barefoot, heart thudding like a drum.

The night air was cool and still. Stars hung low over the olive tree, and the masjid dome glowed faintly under the moonlight. Yusuf climbed onto the stone fence. His throat was dry, but he raised his hands and closed his eyes.

"Allahu Akbar… Allahu Akbar…"

His voice cracked, thin and boyish. But it was loud. Clear. Honest.

Lights flicked on in nearby homes. A window creaked open. An old man put his hand to his heart.

"Ashhadu an la ilaha illallah…"

Some children watched from behind curtains. A woman dropped her pail of water and wept.

Inside the masjid, a young man — once a scholar, now a shopkeeper — unlocked the main door.

"Hayya ‘ala-s-salah… Hayya ‘ala-l-falah…"

Soldiers returned, but this time they paused. One of them, younger than Yusuf’s uncle, stared up at the boy with unreadable eyes.

No one stopped him. No one moved.

When Yusuf finished, he climbed down and walked home. His grandmother waited at the door, tears rolling silently down her cheeks. She said nothing, just pulled him into her arms and whispered into his ear:

“That was the bravest prayer I’ve ever heard.”

The next morning, the speaker was gone, but so was the silence.

A different boy — older — stood near the masjid gate at Fajr and called the adhan again.

By Asr, five men prayed together on the dusty floor.

By Maghrib, families sat beneath the olive tree reciting verses.

And by Isha, the old masjid was full for the first time in twenty years.

Yusuf stood at the back, arms folded, heart steady. He wasn’t just a boy anymore.

He was a reminder.

That even in the darkest corners of the earth, faith is never silent for long.

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About the Creator

muqaddas shura

"Every story holds an emotion.

I bring those emotions to you through words."

I bring you heart-touching stories .Some like fragrance, some like silent tears, and some like cherished memories. Within each story lies a new world ,new feelings.

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