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Kneeling Forever

Some promises are too big for words—they're made with actions.

By Hamayun KhanPublished 6 months ago 2 min read

It was a warm, golden afternoon in June when Ayan knelt down in front of Liyana on the cracked sidewalk of their childhood neighborhood. The world didn’t stop—but it might as well have. Cars passed, birds sang, and somewhere a child laughed, but for Ayan, only the moment existed.

He didn’t have a diamond ring. No candlelit dinner, no photographer hidden in the bushes. Just a single white rose—delicate and trembling slightly in his hand—and a heart pounding with more fear than excitement.

Liyana stood still, her eyes locked on him, a thousand emotions flickering across her face. The wind tousled her hair, and for a heartbeat, Ayan thought she looked just like the girl he fell in love with when they were fifteen—back when love meant passing notes and holding hands under the table.

They had grown since then. Life happened. College, careers, dreams that diverged. Arguments that echoed into silence. He had watched her walk away once, tears in her eyes and pain in her steps. But he never stopped loving her.

Now, here they were again—two people stitched together by memories and stitched apart by choices.

Ayan cleared his throat.

“I know a rose isn’t much,” he said quietly, “and maybe this moment isn’t perfect. But I’ve realized something—promises don’t need grand speeches. They need courage. And actions.”

He looked down at the rose, its petals slightly curled.

“This rose means I’ve waited. It means I’ve learned. And I’m kneeling not to ask for your answer—but to show you mine. My love isn’t in the words I say, Liyana. It’s in every decision I make to choose you, again and again.”

Her fingers trembled slightly as she took the rose, holding it close like it was something sacred.

“Ayan...” she whispered, her voice caught between tears and disbelief. “After all this time… why now?”

He stood slowly, not breaking her gaze.

“Because I finally realized that forever doesn’t start with a ring,” he said. “It starts with a moment like this—when you're ready to kneel and promise with your whole soul, even if you don’t know what tomorrow holds.”

Tears traced silent paths down her cheeks.

All the months apart. The unanswered messages. The fear of loving someone so deeply it hurt. All of it flooded back—but so did the nights they laughed under the stars. The songs they shared. The way his hand always found hers in a crowd.

She looked at the rose again.

“You still remember white is my favorite,” she said, smiling through the tears.

He chuckled softly. “Some things are impossible to forget.”

A silence fell over them, thick with meaning, heavy with memories. But it wasn’t the uncomfortable kind. It was the kind that needed no words. Like two hearts speaking quietly beneath the noise of the world.

Then, without warning, Liyana stepped forward and embraced him. Tightly. Desperately. Like she was afraid to let go again.

“You never needed a ring,” she whispered into his shoulder. “You already had my forever. I was just waiting for you to remember it.”

He closed his eyes, breathing her in, the scent of roses and hope filling his lungs.

Some promises don’t need vows or glittering jewelry.

They just need the courage to kneel and the strength to love—

Forever.

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About the Creator

Hamayun Khan

Hi! I'm Hamayun—a storyteller inspired by motivation, growth, and real-life moments. As a KDP publisher, affiliate marketer & digital creator, I write to uplift, connect, and inspire. Stick around—something here might be meant for you.

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