The Last Breath of Eternity
In the End, Life Matters Because It Ends

The Last Breath of Eternity
They called it Eterna—the invention that redefined existence. A microscopic lattice of self-repairing nanites, seamlessly integrated into human biology. With each heartbeat, they restored decaying cells, reversed aging, and made death an option rather than an inevitability. The world hailed it as the pinnacle of progress, the final victory over time.
For the first hundred years, it was paradise. Diseases disappeared. The elderly danced like children. No one feared the midnight knock of mortality. The world blossomed in ways never imagined—art that took centuries to complete, love that endured beyond lifetimes, knowledge that deepened without limit.
But eternity, it turned out, was not meant for the human soul.
At first, the signs were subtle. A painter who had once filled his canvases with color found himself uninspired, his passion dulled by the knowledge that he had forever to refine his brushstrokes. Lovers who had sworn eternity to one another found that eternity stretched too long. The thrill of urgency faded, and with it, the fire that made love burn bright.
Then came the wanderers.
Those who had lived too long, who had seen empires rise and fall, who had lost the ability to care. They wandered the cities like ghosts, their faces empty, their souls untouched by time but eroded by meaninglessness. Some sat in gardens for centuries, watching the seasons change with hollow eyes. Others roamed the world endlessly, hoping that a new horizon might reignite something in them. But no matter how far they walked, they could not escape eternity.
“You cannot stretch the human spirit beyond its design,” whispered an old philosopher, who no longer aged but carried the weight of a thousand years in his eyes. “We were built to cherish because we were built to lose.”
The world had conquered death but lost life.
A quiet movement began, first in whispers, then in bold declarations. They called themselves The Mortalists. People who chose to let go. Who turned off their nanites and allowed themselves to fade, to embrace the delicate, fleeting beauty of being temporary.
At first, they were ridiculed. The immortals could not comprehend why anyone would choose oblivion. Governments tried to stop them, fearing that the return of death would unravel the very fabric of society. But death was not an enemy to the Mortalists. It was a homecoming.
One by one, they left. Some walked into the forests, choosing to hear the rustling leaves one last time. Others climbed mountains, longing for the feeling of wind biting at their skin. Some simply lay beneath the stars, watching them with the same awe as their ancestors had before time became a cage.
A poet wrote his final words in the sand, knowing the tide would take them. A musician played a song so beautiful it made the immortals weep—because they would never understand its sorrow. A mother, who had lived long enough to see her children outgrow the need for her, whispered a prayer of gratitude before closing her eyes for the last time.
And as they did, they found something the immortals had long forgotten—the sweetness of a sunset when you know it may be your last, the way love burns brighter when it is borrowed from time, the aching beauty of a moment that will never come again.
As the centuries passed, the world changed again. The cities of the immortals grew quiet, their streets echoing with the absence of those who had chosen to leave. Statues were built in honor of the Mortalists, their names whispered like myths.
And then, one day, the last among them stood at the edge of the sea.
He had lived longer than he ever wished. He had watched the world shift and turn, had seen the stars spin in the great wheel of time. But now, at last, he was ready.
The waves reached for his feet like old friends. The wind carried whispers of all he had ever been.
He closed his eyes.
And smiled.
Because he had truly lived
About the Creator
Dakota John von Bergen
Old Soul
Touched by the Light




Comments (1)
Take away our humanity and we become hollow shells. It is what makes us who we are. A really a great read.