The Voice in the Wind
Discernment in a World of Illusions

The Voice in the Wind
In the quiet village of Elowen, where wind whispered through silver-leafed trees and stars gleamed like watchful eyes, lived a girl named Mira. She was known for her kindness, her gentle voice, and her ever-curious heart. But more than anything, Mira was known for one thing she lacked: discernment.
Mira trusted easily. When the merchant came offering “wishes in a bottle,” she believed him. When the travelling bard sang of a hidden treasure beneath the mountains, she packed her bag. Time and again, she gave her faith without filter, mistaking charm for truth and promises for facts.
“Child,” her grandmother would say, tapping her wooden cane, “not all that glitters is gold, and not every smiling face hides good intent. Learn to see with more than your eyes.”
Mira would nod, but her heart clung to the idea that everyone meant well. That the world was as kind as she wanted it to be.
One autumn, the wind changed. It blew colder, sharper, as if it carried secrets it couldn’t keep. Travelers brought tales of a man in a crimson cloak who offered answers—for a price. “He knows things,” they whispered. “He tells you who to trust. Who your enemies are. Who you really are.”
Mira was intrigued.
One dusk, she found him near the edge of the forest, standing like a shadow between two ancient oaks. His eyes were hidden beneath the hood, but his voice was as smooth as silk over stone.
“You seek truth,” he said. “But truth is hidden beneath layers. I can help you see. All I ask is a single memory in return.”
Mira hesitated. “A memory?”
“Just one,” he said. “A childhood song, a forgotten smell, the warmth of a certain smile. Small prices.”
Desperate for clarity in a world growing more complex, Mira agreed.
With each memory she gave, she saw more clearly—or so she thought. The crimson man showed her lies behind friends’ laughter, envy behind compliments, betrayal lurking in every shadow. Soon, Mira trusted no one. Where once she had seen light in every soul, now she saw only motives, masks, manipulation.
She returned home colder than the wind itself.
One night, her grandmother called her close.
“You’ve changed, Mira.”
“I’ve learned,” Mira replied. “Not everyone is what they seem.”
“True,” her grandmother nodded. “But neither is everyone a monster.”
That night, Mira dreamed of the crimson man’s eyes—now visible, and hollow. In her dream, she stood in front of a mirror, but saw only fog where her face should be.
She woke with a weight in her chest. Something felt wrong. The more she tried to discern truth, the more disconnected she became—from her family, her friends, and even herself. She had traded blind trust for blind suspicion.
The next morning, she went to the forest.
“I want them back,” she said to the man in red. “My memories.”
He shook his head. “You traded them. For truth.”
“This isn’t truth,” she said. “It’s fear.”
“Fear is a kind of truth,” he replied. “The purest kind.”
Mira turned away.
She walked deep into the woods, farther than she ever had. There, she met an old woman wrapped in moss and light. Her eyes were clear pools of silence.
“You’ve seen shadows and called them truth,” the woman said. “But truth needs balance. Discernment isn’t about trusting no one—it’s about learning when to trust.”
“I don’t know how anymore,” Mira admitted.
“You begin by listening. Not to what people say, but to how your spirit responds. Not every lie is spoken. Not every truth is loud.”
The woman handed her a small, smooth stone. “Hold this when you must decide. Let it remind you: discernment is not a sword to cut others down. It’s a lantern to find your way.”
Mira returned home.
She did not trust blindly again. But neither did she fear everyone. When the merchant returned with his glittering bottles, she asked what was inside, and waited for his answer. When he hesitated, she smiled and walked away. When her friend sobbed and apologized for a betrayal, Mira felt the stone in her palm, listened to the tremble in the voice, and saw the pain in her friend’s eyes. She forgave.
Discernment, she learned, was not about seeing through people—but seeing *into* them. Past masks, yes—but also past fear. Into hope. Into heart.
Years later, Mira became a teacher. Children gathered at her feet beneath the silver trees as she spoke of winds that whisper, of truth and lies, and of a girl who learned to see with more than her eyes.
And every time a student asked, “How do you know who to trust?” Mira would smile, hold up a smooth, worn stone, and say:
“Listen not just with your ears, but with your soul. And never trade your heart for certainty. Discernment doesn’t erase doubt—it helps you walk through it with wisdom.”
About the Creator
Gabriela Tone
I’ve always had a strong interest in psychology. I’m fascinated by how the mind works, why we feel the way we do, and how our past shapes us. I enjoy reading about human behavior, emotional health, and personal growth.



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