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The Heist That Wasn't

''A Bank Robber has an Existential Crisis in the Middle of a Robbery''

By AbbasPublished about a year ago 3 min read
The Heist That Wasn't
Photo by Ashim D’Silva on Unsplash

The bank was unusually quiet for a Friday afternoon. The only sounds were the faint hum of fluorescent lights and the soft tapping of a teller’s fingers on a keyboard. Suddenly, the stillness was shattered by the clatter of the glass doors as they were thrown open. A man in a black ski mask stormed in, brandishing a gun. He was dressed in dark clothes, his breath coming in short, sharp gasps.

“Everyone down on the floor!” he shouted, his voice cracking slightly. The few customers inside gasped and dropped to the ground, while the tellers froze in place, their eyes wide with fear. The robber’s heart pounded in his chest, adrenaline surging through his veins.

But as he moved toward the counter, something unexpected happened. His hand, gripping the gun, began to tremble. His breaths came faster, more ragged. And then, without warning, a thought struck him with the force of a freight train: **What am I doing?**

The thought was so jarring, so out of place, that it nearly knocked the wind out of him. He stumbled slightly, catching himself on the edge of the counter. The teller, a young woman with wide, frightened eyes, looked up at him, waiting for his next move.

**What am I doing?** The question echoed in his mind, louder and more insistent. He had spent weeks planning this heist. The money was supposed to solve everything—his mounting debts, his failing marriage, the gnawing sense of failure that had been eating away at him for years. But now, standing here with terrified eyes looking back at him, he felt nothing but emptiness.

His thoughts spiraled deeper. **Is this really who I am? Is this what my life has come to?** He had never imagined himself as a criminal, not really. Sure, he’d had rough patches—who didn’t? But this? Robbing a bank? This was something desperate people did.

The gun in his hand suddenly felt heavy, like it was dragging him down. The weight of it, the reality of what he was doing, pressed down on him. His head swam with questions he didn’t have answers to: **What if someone gets hurt? What if I get caught? Is this money really worth losing my soul?**

He looked around the bank, really looked at the people for the first time. The old man huddled by the door, the young mother clutching her child, the teller trembling before him. These were just people, ordinary people going about their lives. And here he was, threatening to tear it all apart for what? A few bundles of cash?

His hand dropped to his side, the gun hanging limply. The room was silent, save for the pounding of his heart in his ears. He took a deep breath, his chest tight with a mix of fear and relief. He knew, in that moment, that he couldn’t go through with it. He wouldn’t.

Slowly, he reached up and pulled off his ski mask, revealing a face lined with worry and regret. The teller gasped, and the others in the bank stared at him in disbelief.

“I’m sorry,” he said, his voice barely above a whisper. “I—I can’t do this.”

He set the gun on the counter, the metal clinking softly against the wood. Then, without another word, he turned and walked out of the bank. The doors swung shut behind him, leaving the stunned occupants in silence.

As he stepped out into the daylight, he felt the weight of his actions—and the consequences yet to come—settling on his shoulders. But for the first time in a long while, he felt something else too: the faintest glimmer of hope.

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Abbas

Versatile writer skilled in both tale & stories. Captivate readers with engaging content & immersive narratives. Passionate about informing, inspiring, & entertaining through words.

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