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When Stars Forgot to Fall

A boy with a broken past, a girl with borrowed time — and a love that never ran out.

By Mazharul DihanPublished 9 months ago 2 min read

The first time Luke saw Flora, she was dancing alone in the rain — arms wide, eyes closed, spinning like the storm itself had fallen in love with her.

He was 17. Quiet. The kind of boy who carried his pain in his pockets and kept his dreams zipped shut. His mother had left when he was 10, and his father coped by pretending Luke wasn’t there. He didn’t speak much at school. He drew galaxies in his notebook because stars didn’t ask questions.

Flora was the opposite — laughter like wind chimes, the kind of person who made strangers feel like old friends. She transferred mid-year and sat next to Luke in art class.

“Do you ever draw people?” she asked on her first day, peeking over at his sketchbook.

He shook his head. “Just space.”

She grinned. “Maybe I’ll be the first.”

She was.

Day after day, Flora pulled him out of the shadows. She talked about everything — her love for old movies, how she believed the moon had moods, how her favorite sound was the ocean at 3 a.m. Luke mostly listened, but he started to speak more. To smile. To hope.

They’d walk home together, her steps always just ahead, his eyes always just behind.

One day, they sat on the roof of her house, legs dangling over the edge, the city blinking below them.

“I don’t want to waste my time,” Flora said softly, looking at the stars.

“You’re not,” Luke replied.

She turned to him, serious for once. “Promise me something?”

“Anything.”

“When the stars forget to fall, when the world feels too big — promise you’ll still find me.”

He nodded, not understanding, but feeling the weight of her words settle into his bones.

Weeks passed. Then months. Their bond grew, quiet but strong. Flora became the sun to Luke’s quiet orbit. And he loved her — not suddenly, but completely.

But love, he learned, isn’t always fair.

One evening, Flora didn’t come to school. Or the next day. Or the day after that.

He called. No answer. He waited by the rooftop. Nothing.

Until a letter came, delivered by her younger brother.

Dear Luke,

I didn’t tell you everything. I didn’t know how.

I have leukemia. I’ve had it for two years. The doctors said I was getting better. But I’m not.

I didn’t want to be your sadness. I wanted to be your light.

But I need you to know — meeting you was the best chapter of my life.

You made me feel like I had forever, even when I didn’t.

Don’t stop drawing stars. Don’t stop looking for me in them.

Because I’ll be there.

Always yours,

Flora

The world cracked.

Luke didn’t speak for days. He tore pages from his sketchbook, unable to hold a pencil without shaking. But then he remembered her words.

“Promise me you’ll still find me.”

So, he drew. Not stars. But her.

Her laugh. Her hair in the rain. Her spinning on rooftops. A thousand Floras in a thousand skies.

He turned her into constellations.

Years later, Luke became an illustrator, famous for a graphic novel called When Stars Forgot to Fall — a love letter in ink and memory.

At every book signing, he kept an extra chair beside him. People asked why.

“For the girl who taught me how to live,” he’d say. “And the promise I’ll never break.”

And every time it rained, Luke still looked up.

Because he knew — somewhere, somehow — she was still dancing.

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About the Creator

Mazharul Dihan

I just love to write stories for people

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