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The Man Who Collected Whispers

In a city where no one listens, one man hears the truths no one dares to speak — even his own.

By VoiceWithinPublished 7 months ago 3 min read

No one knew his name.

In the city of lights and never-ending noise, he drifted like smoke — unnoticed, unremarkable. Every morning, he sat on the same bench in the corner of Willow Park with a small leather notebook and a fountain pen older than the trees.

He called himself a Listener.

But not in the way you’d think.

He didn’t listen to people’s words. People’s words were too loud, too polished, too performative. Instead, he listened for what came in the cracks between their sentences — the sigh before a “fine,” the hesitation in a handshake, the tremble in the silence.

He listened for whispers.

Not literal ones. Inner ones.

And over time, he’d learned how to collect them.

The first whisper he ever caught belonged to a child. A boy, no older than six, who sat quietly on a swing while his parents argued on a bench nearby. The boy didn’t cry. Didn’t shout. But as the man walked past him, he felt it — like a wind blowing not outside, but through him:

“I wish I could disappear.”

It struck him so hard he stopped mid-step.

He turned around. The boy looked straight at him, but said nothing.

The man nodded. Wrote the words in his notebook.

And just like that, he became a collector.

---

They came slowly, then all at once.

The woman on the train gripping her phone:

“I miss who I was before him.”

The old man feeding birds with shaky hands:

“I thought I’d be remembered by now.”

The barista who smiled too wide:

“They think I’m okay.”

The whispers had no accent, no gender, no age. They were raw. Unedited. The voice within, slipping out through the cracks of held-back tears and forced smiles.

He never shared them. Never spoke of them. But he felt them. Carried them. And with each one, a small part of his own silence cracked.

Because long ago, he’d buried a whisper of his own.

---

It was on a winter morning that everything changed.

He was seated in his usual spot when a girl — maybe seventeen — sat across from him without asking. She wore a green scarf and carried a sketchbook. Her eyes were storm-gray, tired but alert.

“I’ve seen you,” she said, voice flat. “You listen.”

He said nothing.

She tilted her head. “Do you ever hear your own?”

He froze.

She watched him. “You’ve got one. Loud as hell.”

He wanted to deny it. But she was right. He had one — the loudest of all. But he’d buried it years ago, the day he lost his sister. He was supposed to pick her up from school, but forgot. A storm came. She never made it home.

“You don’t deserve peace.”

That was his whisper. The one that haunted him.

The girl held out her sketchbook. “Look.”

He hesitated, then opened it.

Inside were pages — not of people, but of emotions. Sorrow shaped like a staircase. Guilt as a sinking boat. Hope as a balloon with frayed strings.

She whispered, “I draw what I feel but can’t say. You write what you hear but won’t face.”

Their eyes met.

And for the first time in years, he spoke aloud: “How do you live with it?”

She smiled sadly. “You don’t. You give it a place to rest.”

---

They met again the next day. And the next.

They didn’t talk much. But they listened — to others, to themselves. Slowly, the whispers in his notebook turned into letters. Thoughts. Forgiveness.

He wrote his own whisper at last:

“I was young. I made a mistake. But I am not only my worst moment.”

And it was like breathing after years underwater.

---

Years later, the man disappeared — quietly, the way he had lived. The bench sat empty. But in his place, someone placed a small box.

Inside were pages and pages of whispers. Typed, handwritten, scribbled.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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