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Stop Everything!

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By Jay LeTron DobbinsPublished 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 3 min read

So let me tell you a story about a guy who saw a woman and thought all of his problems were over the moment he saw her smile!

It was a long and stressful day, as Jay could not find a solution to the latest tie up in claims and with no ideas in sight, the company faced bankruptcy as the payouts started to exceed the company’s assets!

Jay decided to take a stroll as it was his first time in Ghana! He was not about to let a major problem defeat him, but wanted to take a quick break to take in the surroundings. Jay started to take a walk down to the registrar desk to sign up for a round of golf. As he made his way, there she sat!

Her flow was the ease that offered comfort at the end of a stressful day! Jay forgot all about the round of golf and requested to join the young lady for some tea and a bite to eat as he motioned his hand toward the empty seat, hoping she would approve the impromptu request!

Not sure, she was hesitant in her response and said to Jay, “why should I let you join me?” Jay calmly gather himself and started to speak as the gentle wind caught the hint of sent of his Tom Ford cologne as he leaned in to give his explanation!

She was amazed at his level of confidence because most men who approached in the past were not serious and gave no direct intent as if they wanted to play around and waste, precious time!

Not Jay! He gave her a look and with his eyes giving the gesture of commitment and intent, she quickly acknowledged that Jay was not here to play around!

Jay then started to speak!

“I will give you a sound reason as I hope the you would accommodate me, but the choice is completely your and I respect your final decision. I just hope that your decision is to not turn me away because before seeing you, my life was at dismay! The answers were not coming and I couldn’t think clearly, but after seeing you, it all made sense.”

She raised her left eyebrow (which elevated her sex appeal to the maximum power) and asked Jay, “what made sense?” Jay said, “life was going too fast and seeing the calmness on your face, told me to slow down as all things will work for the greater good!”

Jay then told her, “I don’t know what’s next, I just know that it needs to be with you! I need someone who can give me a greater sense of focus and allow me to who I am, flaws and strengths with no judgment.”

Jay started to apologize and told her that he knew it was a bit too much, but she was just what the doctor ordered in the mist of chaos when things seemed as if they can get not better.

Jay kneeled toward her and said, “give me this chance and I will make you no fool! I know that life can be a bit much and we all need to take a step back, however things can be so much better if we take a step back together and look at the world together and say we can do this!”

Jay stood up and saw some flowers over the way! He told her that he would shortly return. She said, “where are you going after that introduction?” Jay replied, “the evening is never perfect until flowers have the chance to feel the energy of a magnificent woman!”

Can you be my magnificent woman?

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About the Creator

Jay LeTron Dobbins

Casual writer! Love to express in print! Tell people how you feel and love life to the fullest with no regrets. Try to say something good about a person when they can hear it, and not when they are gone! Love like no tomorrow.

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  • Alex H Mittelman 12 months ago

    Really fine work! Great job

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