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Kindness in the Middle of Nowhere

How one act of generosity can alter the course of a life

By waseem khanPublished 5 months ago 3 min read

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The road stretched on like a ribbon of faded asphalt, unspooling endlessly under the midday sun. No towns in sight. No gas stations. Just miles of dry earth and the occasional stubborn bush.

Sam’s old sedan had sputtered to a halt an hour ago, the engine giving one last cough before dying completely. The cell signal was nonexistent — one bar flickering in and out like a cruel joke.

He had been heading cross-country, chasing a job opportunity and maybe a fresh start. Now, sweat prickled at his neck, and the heat inside the car was unbearable. He grabbed a water bottle, got out, and sat on the hood, scanning the empty horizon.

That’s when he saw the dust cloud.

A beat-up pickup truck came rattling down the road, slowing as it neared. The driver — a woman in her late fifties, wearing a wide-brimmed straw hat — rolled down her window.

“Car trouble?” she called out, squinting against the glare.

“Yeah,” Sam said. “Won’t start. No service out here either.”

She pulled over, killed the engine, and stepped out. “Name’s Marlene. I’ve got a place about five miles up the road. Let’s see if we can’t get you moving.”

She peered under the hood, fiddled with something, and shook her head. “I’m no mechanic, but I’ve got a phone at my place. Tow truck can come from the next town over. You can wait there — cooler than frying out here.”

Sam hesitated. Strangers were a gamble. But so was heatstroke.

Her “place” turned out to be a small, weathered house with a porch that creaked underfoot and wind chimes singing in the hot breeze. Inside, it smelled faintly of coffee and cedar. She handed him a cold glass of lemonade and pointed to a fan whirring lazily in the corner.

“Sit. Drink. You look like you’ve been through the wringer,” she said.

As the minutes passed, conversation came easily. She told him about her late husband, the vegetable garden out back, and how she’d lived here her whole life. He told her about the job interview waiting in a city two states away, how everything felt like it was teetering on the edge lately.

Marlene listened — really listened — without rushing to offer platitudes. Then she went into another room and came back with a folded twenty-dollar bill.

“For gas,” she said, placing it in his hand before he could protest. “Call it an investment in your future. Just promise me one thing: when you can, you do the same for someone else.”

The tow truck arrived an hour later. Marlene waved from her porch as Sam’s car was hitched up. She pressed a brown paper bag into his hands — inside were two sandwiches, a bag of chips, and a homemade cookie wrapped in wax paper.

The mechanic in the next town got the car running within the afternoon. Sam made it to his interview the following morning. Months later, when he got the job and his life began to settle, he still thought about Marlene.

Years passed before he had the chance to repay her kindness — not directly, but in spirit. One rainy night, he saw a young woman standing beside a broken-down car on the shoulder of the highway. He pulled over, rolled down his window, and called out the same words Marlene had said to him:

“Car trouble?”

Her relieved smile felt like a circle closing.

Sometimes the most lasting changes come from the smallest gestures. A glass of lemonade, a twenty-dollar bill, a promise to pass it on. Kindness in the middle of nowhere had carried him further than he’d ever imagined.

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  • Tammy Mae Dickey 5 months ago

    Pay it forward. Kindness shows up in unexpected places, and unexpected times. Do onto others as you want done to you.

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