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Wood Smoke: Nature’s Rustic Scent

Wood Smoke: Nature’s Rustic Scent

By Shams SaysPublished about a year ago 5 min read
Top Story - December 2024

Rugged white pieces tumble to the soil, collect on the wood heaped underneath the cabin’s iced window. Fuel for the as it were remaining source of warm since the control went out.

Carmen extricates her grasp from the back of the vomit green sofa and faces the open living room. A circular floor covering ranges between her, a coordinating chair, a stone hearth, and oak racks showing collectible cookbooks and a minor wooden train.

Viola returns from one of two other rooms, a sweet scent blending with that of charred timber. Her arms are stacked with two mugs, a hotpad, and a reusable basic need sack. Light booms from the phone tucked beneath her chin, its as it were valuable work this distant from civilization.

“I found cocoa. It's peppermint, your favorite.”

No, it's yours, treats ought to never taste like toothpaste. Carmen swallows the answer, dropping to the floor. "Great."

Viola angles the castiron pot from the coals, her ruby pendant insulting the blazes. As she fills the glasses, steam streams over the lip, surges up, catching her hand. She fumes a breath between her teeth.

Carmen takes her container, clicking her modern nail trim against the elegant porcelain. "What kind of ninety year ancient lady lives this distant out, has reinforcement cocoa but not a generator?"

"I think it's sweet." Viola shrugs. "Kinda reminds me of my gran, but less racist."

Carmen never met the lady who concurred to pay a total stranger to housesit. But when she told Viola it was a terrible thought to go alone, indeed to offer assistance a sweet ancient woman, Viola recommended she come along. Carmen ought to have refused.

"Cheer up, she'll be back to take us down the mountain in the morning, and," Viola scavenges in the pillage, at that point with a flurrish show two packs of marshmallows. "Your choice of little colored or large?"

Carmen focuses to the protuberance of pastels.

"Great choice, at that point we can do smores too!"

Carmen's stomach murmurs and she takes a contemplative taste of cocoa. Minty magma burns the tip of her tongue. "Is there anything more substantial?"

Viola looks the pack open. "There's chocolate pretzels."

Carmen runs a hand over her confront. Did the ancient lady have any teeth. With a weighted murmur she acknowledges them. For a time the as it were sounds are those of desserts being expended and wind battering the modest cabin.

Then a roll sounds out front, went with by a puncturing cry. A bit like an irate engine.

Carmen scrambles for the couch. She gazes into the mysterious brightness of a cold night, breath clouding the glass. But there's nothing in the carport. The sound cuts off.

In the space of a flicker the shadow from the base of one tree jumps out over the scope of white and into the another. A breath tangles in Carmen's throat, her stomach turning into excruciating ties.

"Did you see that!" Carmen doesn't take her look from the tree's base. "That shadow, it moved."

"Maybe it was a raccoon hopping between branches," Viola says, a tremor to her voice.

It's no question cold sufficient to drive any normal animal to its burrow, indeed if raccoons did bounce like that but Carmen gestures.

Viola turns back to the fire, utilizing her mug-free hand to coax another log attop the blazes. "Ok crap."

Carmen's look snaps to her companion. "What?"

"We're down to two logs." Viola shifts the substance of the tinderbox and her forehead droops. "Make that one and a modest bunch of sticks."

A chill slithers down Carmen's spine, she seem have sworn the box was full a diminutive back. "We may fair go to bed?"

"Come on, it's as it were," there's a sharp press and light blasts from Viola's phone, "like seven and we do not require control to have fun."

Carmen's confront scrunches. "Doing what, freezing?"

Viola casts her eyes skyward. "There's more wood right exterior the door."

Carmen's chest chokes, she looks back out the window.

Viola's lips bend. "Need to..."

A sharp scratching rents the discuss, burrows into Carmen’s cranium. She crushes her palms against her ears, in spite of the fact that the sound is gone. Time extends out into an nebulous thing, that may be a minute or an endlessness. At a few point Carmen’s lungs start to work again.

Viola drags on her coat, fo-fur tufted around its hood and sleeves.

“You aren’t truly going out there!”

“We require more kindling and I’d like to know what that was. But we’ll never discover out cringing in here,” Viola says, a slight tremor behind her unforgiving words. “If a tree fell on the roof we may require to do something to keep snow from getting in.”

That didn’t sound like a tree falling, but having never listened one, Carmen’s contention flops and passes on on her tongue.

Viola flicks her phone light on. “Be back in a minute.”

There’s a surge of cold, upending each follicle on Carmen’s being, and the entryway snaps closed behind Viola. Snow crunches, wind crying between the trees, in the hollows of the house. At that point nothing, not so much as the whisper of a falling leaf. A stink, like rot soaks in gingerbread, leaks through the cabin’s cracks.

Dark rain blotches the snow, shaping extraordinary dark red patches. Not rain, blood. Sound returns. With a damp plink a mutilated hand lands on the wood heap. Carmen clutches her mouth, backing from the window.

“Viola,” the word come out a choked question.

The entryway rattles. Carmen looks around, beat thundering in her ears. Her look falls on the poker and she grabs it up. The handle turns. She fixes her hold. Smokey claws wrap the entryway outline. They develop denser, helping, into wrinkled human fingers.

The entryway swings wide and in strolls a stooped lady with gray wisps of hair. Carmen’s shoulders droop, blood returning to her fingers. The ancient lady tilts her head at Carmen and smiles, uncovering spiked teeth dribbling red. And resting on her age-spotted chest is Viola’s ruby pendant.

Carmen sucks in a breath. Smoke coils from the ancient woman, her body getting to be less strong. The poker rattles in Carmen’s handles. Sound squints out and obscurity wraps her.

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I am a writer passionate about crafting engaging stories that connect with readers. Through vivid storytelling and thought-provoking themes, they aim to inspire and entertain.

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  • Angela Shiflettabout a year ago

    Excellent!

  • Plumbing Jobsabout a year ago

    congratulations on getting to the top for you story :)

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Congrats on your top story.

  • Asif Mansoorabout a year ago

    Congratulations for TS

  • Komalabout a year ago

    Congratulations on earning TS 🎉

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Wow but that was a bit creepy and scary. Well done. Congratulations on the Top Story, too.

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!!!

  • Beth Sarahabout a year ago

    Wow. What a visceral, chilling tale ✨

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