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Spooky Micro Challenge No. 3

By Kendall Defoe Published about a year ago 2 min read
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There was only one rule: don’t open the door...

'Step right up!'

The carny kept up his blare as he stood with the black-lettered rules leaning over him. On a simple plywood board, lacquered in white, the game was clear:

Hit the target! Don't hit the door!

It was clear what would happen if he missed his target: the door behind it would open and...

'Mister, take yer shot!'

He almost dropped the heavy plastic ball in his hand (dropping the ball; story of his life), and stared at the target.

It was his face.

But why...?

'First shot!'

He threw, but his aim was off. The ball sailed past it, hitting the door frame.

'Two more chances! I think luck is on yer side, sir!'

He wanted to punch the carny in the face (his too familiar face). The next throw actually hurt his arm (too much force). It glanced off the face, and he felt like he had been struck himself.

Where had he seen it before?

'All good things come in threes, they say! One more throw, sir, and you could win it all!'

The last ball was right in front of him, still as a stone. And he wanted to leave.

He picked it up.

He felt his sweat become intimate with it.

He threw.

The ball went through the face, hitting the door and...

He woke up, once again...

And he could see the carny's true features (Devil in all the details).

'Step right up!'

He was still at the stand, looking at the game and noting the carny's terrible smile. And he had to smile.

He was still in Hell.

'Three shots and you can win...'

But he never won.

He never could.

He just had to play the game.

-296 words

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  • Reileyabout a year ago

    So creative with the endless hellish loop! I enjoyed how much tenser the story got as it progressed!

  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    Oh, I like this one, I shy away from shows with repeating loops, makes me feel dizzy. How to get out of hell. Sounds like another story completely. Great premise here.

  • Oh my, that's a loop I never wanna be stuck in. Loved your story!

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    And the game's sometimes not worth playing. A creative one, Kendall,

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    I enjoyed how your character knew he kept getting conned into taking one mor shot even though he knew he had no chance of winning. Great entry, Kendall!

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about a year ago

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