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Whispers from the Locked Room

Some Doors Were Meant to Stay Closed

By Mohammad ArifPublished 6 months ago 3 min read

The first time Ava heard the whispers, she was convinced it was the wind.

The old Greystone Manor had been her aunt’s house—more a crumbling relic than a home, with ivy crawling over its stone face and windows that cried with every gust. When Aunt Clara passed, Ava inherited it out of nowhere. No will. No prior contact. Just a letter from a solicitor and a heavy iron key delivered in a velvet pouch.

“Let it rot,” her mother had said. “That place has always been cursed.”

But Ava was curious. She was a writer chasing inspiration and mystery. A sprawling, abandoned manor in the middle of nowhere seemed like the perfect setting to unlock a story—or maybe something more.

By the third night, Ava had explored most of the house. Dust lay thick over furniture draped in sheets like forgotten ghosts. The attic groaned when she walked over it, and the basement reeked of mildew and earth. But what intrigued her most was the room at the end of the third-floor hallway—the only one with a locked door.

It was strange. The rest of the manor was wide open, yet this door was solid oak, unmarked, with an iron handle that chilled her fingers even when the sun was out. The key she’d received didn’t fit.

That’s when the whispers began.

Soft. Almost unintelligible. A hush of breath just beyond the edge of hearing. She thought it was her mind playing tricks—too many late nights, too many horror novels. But each time she passed the locked door, she felt something shift in the air. A pulling sensation. Like the door wanted her to stay.

On the seventh night, she stood in front of it for nearly an hour. The whispers grew louder. Still not words exactly, more… feelings. Grief. Longing. A warning? She pressed her ear to the wood.

“Don’t,” a voice breathed. Not from behind the door—from inside her mind.

Ava recoiled, heart racing. She didn’t sleep that night.

The next morning, she searched the house for another key. She found it beneath a floorboard in the study, hidden beneath a cracked portrait of Aunt Clara. The key was ornate, silver, and humming with cold energy.

She should have stopped there.

But stories don’t write themselves, she reasoned. She had come here for truth. For mystery. And the room was calling.

The key fit perfectly. As it turned, the air around her thickened. The house seemed to hold its breath.

The door creaked open.

Inside was a room untouched by time. A child’s room. Pale blue walls, a rocking horse in the corner, a small bed with neatly tucked sheets. Toys scattered neatly across the floor, as though they were waiting to be played with.

And on the bed sat a doll.

It was porcelain, dressed in lace, with wide, unblinking glass eyes that gleamed in the dim light. Ava stepped forward—and the door slammed shut behind her.

The whispers surged.

She took him.

She locked the truth away.

She lied. Lied. Lied.

Ava spun, heart thudding in her ears. The air turned ice cold. The doll’s head tilted.

“No,” Ava whispered. “This isn’t real.”

But the truth was unraveling. She saw flashes in her mind—Aunt Clara screaming, dragging a boy into this room. Locking the door. Years passed. The whispers were his.

The boy was never seen again.

The doll slid from the bed. Fell to the floor. Shattered.

In its place was a faded photograph—of a boy with sad eyes and Ava’s last name. Her uncle. A child no one ever spoke of. A secret buried so deep, only the house remembered.

The whispers quieted.

The door creaked open behind her.

Some doors are meant to stay closed. But once opened, they don’t always shut again.

One Week Later

Ava’s manuscript was found on the desk in the manor’s study—an unfinished story about a locked room and whispers from the past. The final pages were soaked in ink and water, smudged beyond recognition. She was never found.

But sometimes, if you stand outside that third-floor room, you can hear her voice, faint and pleading:

“Close it… please, close the door…”

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About the Creator

Mohammad Arif

I am health professional and freelance writer, who have 4 years of experience in the field of freelance writing. I also offer paraphrasing/rewriting services to my clients.I love to work on subjects like HEALTH & fitness, fashion, travel.

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