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Whispers Behind the Walls

Some houses are not abandoned — they are waiting.

By muqaddas shuraPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

The house at the end of Marrow Lane had been empty for twenty years.

Or so everyone thought.

Children dared each other to touch its rotting fence. Teenagers took blurry photos at night, hoping to catch a ghost. Adults simply crossed the street and muttered a prayer under their breath.

It was Grace who broke the rules. Grace, stubborn and curious at sixteen, didn’t believe in haunted houses. She believed in cracked foundations and rats. She believed in stories made up to scare kids. So one evening, when the sun dipped low and the sky turned a bruised purple, she walked up to the house and pushed open the door.

It wasn’t locked.

The air inside was cold, damp, and heavy, as if it hadn’t moved in decades. The floorboards creaked with each step, but not with her weight alone. It was as if the house itself breathed — slow, deep, reluctant.

“Hello?” Grace called into the dark hallway.

The house did not answer with voices.

It answered with whispers.

Soft, rustling sounds, like dry leaves brushing against stone. Grace’s skin prickled. She told herself it was just the wind sneaking through broken windows. Still, she clutched her flashlight tighter.

The beam of light revealed peeling wallpaper, shattered picture frames, and old stains that looked almost — almost — like handprints. Upstairs, something tapped lightly. A slow, deliberate tapping, like fingers drumming on wood.

Grace grinned nervously. “It’s just a squirrel. Or a raccoon.”

But something in her gut twisted. It was that instinct, the one you can’t argue with — the one that screams run when something isn’t right.

She moved deeper into the house.

In the living room, there was an old mirror hanging crookedly on the wall. Its surface was cracked, splintered like a spiderweb. As she passed it, she thought she saw something move in the reflection — a figure, tall and gaunt, just behind her.

She spun around.

Nothing.

Only silence, thick and suffocating.

Then the whispers returned, louder now, weaving through the air like smoke:

"Leave... leave... leave..."

Grace’s heart hammered. Her flashlight flickered, dimmed, then steadied. Her mouth felt dry. She told herself to turn back, but something — a terrible, crawling curiosity — pushed her forward.

The kitchen smelled of mildew and something else — something metallic, like old blood. In the center of the floor was a door she hadn’t noticed before. A trapdoor, half-hidden under a rotting rug.

The whispers grew frantic:

"Don’t open it... don’t open it..."

Grace, feeling half-hypnotized, bent down and gripped the iron ring on the trapdoor. It was ice cold. She pulled.

With a groan that sounded almost like a scream, the door creaked open, revealing a stairway leading down into absolute darkness.

For a long moment, she hesitated.

Then — foolish, brave, reckless — she descended.

The stairs moaned under her weight. The air grew colder, damper, and thick with the stench of decay. Halfway down, her flashlight died.

Pitch black.

She froze, heart racing, when she heard it: breathing. Not her own — heavier, raspier, right in front of her.

A hand, rough and clawed, brushed her arm.

Grace shrieked and stumbled backward, scrambling up the stairs. Something laughed behind her — a low, broken sound that echoed off the stone walls. She slammed the trapdoor shut and ran for the front door.

But the house had changed.

The hallway stretched endlessly, twisting and warping. Doors appeared where there had been none. The walls pulsed, as if alive. Shadows slipped along the edges of her vision, whispering her name.

"Grace... Grace... Grace..."

She ran, tears streaming down her face, until she found a window. She didn’t think — she just threw herself through it, glass shattering around her.

Outside, the streetlights buzzed warmly, and the cool night air smelled sweet. She lay there, bleeding from cuts, gasping for breath, staring up at the dark silhouette of the house.

From the broken window, dozens of pale hands waved slowly, like weeds swaying underwater.

Grace never spoke of what she saw inside Marrow Lane.

But she was not the last.

The house waits still — for the next curious soul.

Because Marrow Lane is not abandoned.

It is hungry.

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About the Creator

muqaddas shura

"Every story holds an emotion.

I bring those emotions to you through words."

I bring you heart-touching stories .Some like fragrance, some like silent tears, and some like cherished memories. Within each story lies a new world ,new feelings.

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  • Nikita Angel9 months ago

    Very beautiful

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