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When they scream!

By Apollo Johnson

By Apollo Johnson Published about a year ago 1 min read

There was only one rule: don’t open the door. The detective reads on the cell phone of the deceased man with his rib cage exposed. Flesh barely hanging on from the walls slowly slides down as the detective walks around the trail of mutilated corpses. He pulls out a small rag as he holds it up to his nose to shield him from the smell. As he steps around avoiding the pools of blood, his stomach starts to turn and fights to come out of him. While he examines the room his mind starts to slowly piece together the carnage that occurred.

The detective continues his search for answers as he walks through a door leading to a smaller room. The room overcome with darkness admitted a putrid smell as the detective reluctantly advances brandishing a flashlight accompanied by his handgun. The light shines slowly moving toward the ceiling and the detective jumps back as blood falls on his face from the hanging corpses. He falls down as his flashlight shines on limbs and severed heads that were displayed in a makeshift shrine in the form of an upside down cross. He crawls forward quickly attempting to grab his flash light while he slips and falls covering himself in the decomposing flesh that surrounds him.

He screams in disgust and his adrenaline kicks in as he scrambles to his feet grabbing his flashlight and blood soaked gun. He tries to move but his body is paralyzed by the elongated hand that gently grabs him from behind. The detective is saturated with panic as the silhouette of the being is revealed to him.

“God please save me!” The detective says.

“God doesn’t exist behind the door.” The entity says in a demonic voice.

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About the Creator

Apollo Johnson

The idea of bringing the emotion to life is what motivates me. Good story telling is the key to life and the heart of our history as a people. My goal is to inspire and be remembered as a great story teller. I offer a look into my mind.

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  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    You are supposed to enter it in the Horror genre for the challenge. Its a good story.

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