Through the Lens of Unknowing
The Subject Remains Unaware

I watched in horror as the documentary’s grainy footage played. Familiar streets blurred into a woman walking a dog—my dog—years ago. “The subject remains unaware of their role,” the narrator droned, chillingly detached. My pulse quickened. I rewound, desperate for context. There was my childhood home, my college dorm, even my first job, all filmed covertly.
The footage flickered, jumping through time. A younger version of myself rode a bike down a sunlit street. Another clip: me at my high school graduation, throwing my cap into the air. The next, a birthday party I barely remembered. They had been watching me for years. Decades.
I swallowed hard and pressed pause, my fingers trembling over the remote. The screen remained frozen on my face—smiling, unsuspecting, trapped in the past. My mind raced. Who had taken these videos? Why? I felt the walls closing in, the weight of unseen eyes pressing against me. This wasn’t a documentary. It was surveillance.
A sharp noise startled me. My phone buzzed against the coffee table. I glanced down. No caller ID. The timing sent a cold prickle down my spine. Ignoring it, I turned back to the TV and pressed play.
The camera cut to a live feed.
There I was now, sitting on the couch, clutching the remote. My breath hitched.
“This real-time footage,” the narrator continued, “marks their moment of realization.”
The air thickened with an almost tangible sense of dread. I turned slowly, scanning the room. The windows were shut, the blinds drawn. The only light came from the television’s cold glow. My own reflection flickered in the dark screen, wide-eyed and pale.
Another notification lit up my phone. A single message: Don’t move.
I jolted upright. My breath came fast and shallow. Every nerve in my body screamed to run, but to where? I was alone. Or at least, I had thought I was.
The knock came next.
Soft at first. Deliberate.
Then louder.
The screen blinked: The end begins now.
I dropped the remote. The knock sounded again, this time heavier, more insistent. The door rattled in its frame.
I backed away, my mind scrambling for rational explanations. A prank? A mistake? But deep down, I knew. This was part of the film. A scene unfolding exactly as it was meant to.
The television screen flickered again. The camera angle had changed. No longer a feed from my living room—this was outside. A shadowy figure stood at my doorstep, their face obscured by the grain of the footage.
They raised a hand. Knock. Knock. Knock.
My phone vibrated again. Another message: Open the door.
I shook my head. No. I wasn’t playing along. I wasn’t part of this. I stumbled backward, toward the kitchen, searching for something—anything—to defend myself. A knife. A phone to call the police. My fingers fumbled against the counter, but before I could grab anything, the TV screen changed again.
A new clip. Pre-recorded.
It showed me, moments from now, opening the door.
I froze.
On the screen, my own hand reached for the knob. The door creaked open, revealing darkness beyond. A figure stepped forward, and then—
The video cut to static.
I was shaking. My breath came in ragged gasps.
“No,” I whispered to the empty room. “That’s not real. That hasn’t happened.”
Another knock.
Harder this time.
I clenched my fists. I wouldn’t do it. I wouldn’t let them control me.
The TV crackled again. A new scene. This one showed the inside of my apartment—but something had changed. The furniture was shifted slightly, the shadows cast in strange angles. The door was open. And I was gone.
The knock became pounding.
BANG. BANG. BANG.
I turned toward the door, my body moving before my mind could stop it.
A final message flashed across the screen. The ending is inevitable.
The doorknob turned.
I opened my mouth to scream.
About the Creator
Diane Foster
I’m a professional writer, proofreader, and all-round online entrepreneur, UK. I’m married to a rock star who had his long-awaited liver transplant in August 2025.
When not working, you’ll find me with a glass of wine, immersed in poetry.
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters



Comments (3)
Intense. Awesome! Thanks for submitting to my challenge!
This is very cool, Diane! I'm surprised it hasn't gotten more reads. I found it from the Words from the Past line-up. I'm 64. Growing up, I wanted to be Stephen King. Horror is my first love. I started with Vocal in 2018 when it was an entirely different place and I published several (kinda long) horror stories. I try to tailor my stuff for this audience and endeavor to write stories that are a bit shorter. I've read a lot of horror but I still found this *very* creepy. When your central character was saying "No" that she wouldn't play along... I was thinking exactly the same thing. "No way in hell I'm opening that door!" And then she ended up opening it in the future? Open ended stories are cool too. I don't write many like this myself... but I enjoy them. Let the reader figure it out! I saw you read my filthy story yesterday. Thank you! At the moment, I'm trying to read every entry in the Love in 50 words challenge.... and I suspect there are roughly 63,000 entries. But I'll get back to your stories eventually and read more. It was a pleasure! ⚡💙⚡
Whoa, this gave me instant chills! That suspenseful twist hit hard—brilliantly eerie and gripping. Through the lens of unknowing, indeed!✨