The Yuletide Visitor
The snowstorm was unforgiving, howling outside the small cabin on the edge of Pine Hollow
The snowstorm was unforgiving, howling outside the small cabin on the edge of Pine Hollow. The fire in the hearth crackled softly, casting warm shadows across the walls, but the wind outside seemed to tear at the world with a fury that made the warmth inside all the more precious. Inside, the Anderson family huddled together, enjoying their Christmas Eve dinner, unaware of the terror that was about to descend upon them.
Thomas Anderson, a father of three, raised his glass. "Here's to family, and the joy of the season," he said, smiling at his wife, Emily, and their children—Ryan, ten; Lucy, eight; and young little Eli, who had just turned four.
“Cheers,” Emily echoed, her eyes glimmering as the firelight danced in them.
Just then, a loud knock echoed from the door, startling the entire family. Thomas rose from the table, glancing out the window. The snowstorm had grown worse, and he hadn’t seen anyone pass by since the morning. He was about to brush it off when the knock came again, more insistent this time.
"Who could that be?" Emily asked, concern creeping into her voice.
"I'll check," Thomas said, trying to reassure her. But as he opened the door, a gust of freezing wind swept inside, biting at his skin. Standing at the threshold was an old man, hunched and weather-beaten, his face hidden beneath the heavy furs of his cloak. His long, white beard framed a face that was both ancient and gaunt, his eyes gleaming like embers in the dark.
"Please," the old man rasped, his voice gravelly, "I need shelter. The storm… it is too much."
Thomas hesitated, but only for a moment. His gaze flickered back to Emily, who gave him a silent nod.
"Come in," Thomas said, stepping aside.
The old man shuffled inside, his heavy boots leaving a trail of snow across the wooden floor. He gave a small bow of gratitude, and Thomas closed the door, shutting out the fury of the storm.
The family gathered in the living room, watching the old man settle himself by the fire. He smiled faintly at them, though the expression didn't reach his eyes.
"Thank you," he said, his voice like the creaking of old wood. "It’s rare that I find such kindness… especially at this time of year."
Thomas was about to offer him some food when Ryan, curious and perhaps a little too bold for his age, asked, “Who are you, mister? Where do you come from?”
The old man chuckled softly, but the sound was cold and empty. "I come from the shadows that others are too afraid to see. But I am grateful for your warmth, young one."
Something about his tone sent a chill down Thomas’s spine. He dismissed the feeling, blaming the storm and the long night. The family continued their dinner, trying to keep the conversation light despite the unsettling presence of their unexpected guest.
As the evening wore on, Thomas couldn’t shake the feeling that something was wrong. The old man’s eyes never seemed to leave the children, especially Lucy, who had been shyly eyeing him from the corner.
After a while, the old man stood and stretched, his movements slow and deliberate. "I must take my leave," he said. "But first, a small gift."
“Gift?” Emily asked, her brow furrowing.
The old man reached into the folds of his cloak and pulled out a small, intricately carved wooden figurine—a goat, its horns twisting into the shape of spirals. It was beautiful, but there was something off about it. The eyes seemed too dark, too knowing.
“For your son,” the old man said, handing the figurine to Ryan. “A gift for good boys.”
Ryan took the figurine, his eyes wide. "Thank you, mister," he said, smiling in earnest.
"Not for you," the old man muttered softly, but only Ryan heard him. “Not for you.”
A sudden chill washed over the room, and Thomas stepped forward, his instincts on high alert. "Are you sure you need to leave? The storm’s getting worse outside."
The old man smiled, revealing teeth that were too sharp, too yellow. "The storm is nothing. I have more pressing matters."
Suddenly, his smile faded, and his eyes turned hard. The temperature in the room seemed to drop. The fire flickered, and the shadows deepened unnaturally.
"Your family, Thomas," the old man rasped, his voice now dripping with malice, "is on my list."
A cold rush of dread surged through Thomas’s veins. "What do you mean? We’ve done nothing wrong."
The old man’s smile returned, but it was twisted, cruel. "Oh, you think you’ve been good. But your son, Ryan, has been quite the opposite. Always the troublemaker. Always the one to defy. And your daughter, Lucy… such an ungrateful child."
Emily gasped. “What are you talking about?”
The old man’s face contorted into a grotesque grin. “I am Krampus. And you, like many others, have failed to keep your children in line. I do not give gifts like Santa. I take what is mine.”
Before anyone could react, the old man—Krampus—extended a massive, clawed hand toward Ryan, his eyes gleaming with malevolent intent.
"Stay away from him!" Thomas shouted, rushing forward, but it was too late. Krampus’s hand shot out, grabbing Ryan by the collar and lifting him off the ground as if he weighed nothing.
The children screamed, but Krampus’s gaze held them frozen, their bodies trembling in fear.
“Please, stop!” Emily cried, rushing toward the monster.
“You think begging will help? You’ve been warned for years. Your children are mine,” Krampus growled, his voice like the cracking of ice.
But just as Krampus was about to drag Ryan away, a loud crash shook the room, and the door flew open. The storm outside was now a howl of fury, and there stood a figure in the doorway—tall, dark, and imposing.
It was Santa Claus. His eyes were narrowed, his face stern, and in his hands was a gleaming golden staff.
"Enough, Krampus," Santa’s voice boomed, shaking the very air.
Krampus hissed, dropping Ryan back to the floor. “You think you can stop me, old man?”
“I will not allow you to ruin another family’s Christmas,” Santa declared, raising his staff. The room filled with light, pushing back the shadows that had engulfed the cabin.
Krampus snarled, disappearing into the storm with a final warning: “This is not over. I will return.”
Santa turned to the family, his expression softening. “You are safe. For now.”
As Krampus vanished, the storm outside began to subside, and the warmth of the fire returned. But the Anderson family would never forget the night the Yuletide visitor came to call—and the price they nearly paid for their children’s misdeeds.
About the Creator
Modhilraj
Modhilraj writes lifestyle-inspired horror where everyday routines slowly unravel into dread. His stories explore fear hidden in habits, homes, and quiet moments—because the most unsettling horrors live inside normal life.


Comments (1)
I'm rooting for Krampus, lol. Awesome story!