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The Whispers of Black Hollow

Graymoor House, an abandoned mansion, can be found deep within the gloomy Black Hollow woods. Locals warn travelers to avoid its shadow, especially after sundown, for the house is said to whisper.

By Shahidul islamPublished 8 months ago 3 min read
The Whispers of Black Hollow
Photo by Robert Zunikoff on Unsplash

Chapter 1: The Arrival

Jared and Melissa were thrill-seekers. Urban exploration was their passion, and the tales of Graymoor House had always intrigued them. It was said that the Whitlock family, who lived there in 1887, vanished mysteriously one stormy night. No bodies were ever found, and those who dared enter could hear whispers lingering in the walls. One foggy evening, they parked their car near the rusted iron gates of the estate. The path leading to the mansion was choked with weeds and shadows. The sound of the gate grumbling as they opened it was drowned out by the thick mist. 'You sure about this?' Melissa asked, her eyes fixed on the towering silhouette of the mansion.

Jared nodded, gripping his flashlight tightly. 'We came this far. Let’s see what’s inside.'

The front door stood ajar, its hinges splintered and rusted. Darkness spilled out like ink, thick and suffocating. They stepped inside, and the door creaked shut behind them. The sound echoed through the empty halls.

Chapter 2: The Whispers Begin

The first whispers were faint, almost like a breeze brushing against the walls. Melissa paused. 'Did you hear that?' she whispered.

Jared shone his flashlight around the grand foyer. 'Old houses make noises,' he replied, though his voice wavered.

They walked deeper into the mansion, dust and cobwebs clinging to every corner. Shadows stretched unnaturally long, flickering as their lights passed. The whispers grew louder, more distinct—words they couldn’t understand, murmuring from the walls.

'Hello?' Melissa called out, her voice swallowed by the darkness. Only whispers answered her, soft and urgent.

Chapter 3: Secrets Unveiled

They found a room at the end of the hall, its door slightly ajar. Pushing it open, they stepped into what must have been a study. Dust-coated books lined the shelves, and a grand desk stood untouched, as if waiting for its owner’s return.

Jared picked up a photograph from the desk, brushing away the dust. 'It’s them,' he said, showing it to Melissa. A family portrait of the Whitlocks stared back—father, mother, and two children. Their eyes seemed to follow them, hollow and accusing.

Suddenly, a whisper rose to a scream—Sarah... Sarah... Sarah! The lights flickered, and the room seemed to close in around them. Melissa stumbled back. 'We need to leave!' Despite her cries, the door slammed shut, sealing them in.

Chapter 4: The Haunting Truth

Darkness consumed the room, and the whispers became voices, clear and chilling. 'Help us...free us...' they cried. Shadows moved along the walls, coalescing into figures—pale, translucent, and broken. Jared backed up, his breath catching. 'This isn’t real,' he whispered.

One of the apparitions stepped forward, its face twisted with anguish. 'He’s still here...' it moaned, pointing toward the far wall where a portrait of the Whitlock patriarch hung, eyes dark and unblinking.

The whispers surged, louder and more desperate. 'Find him...end it...' The temperature dropped, and their breath came out in misty puffs. Melissa grabbed Jared’s arm. 'We have to go. Now.'

Chapter 5: Escape or Eternity

They bolted for the door, but the shadows closed in, grasping at their ankles, whispering their names. Jared kicked the door, and it splintered open. Light spilled in from the hallway, and they ran, the whispers following them, begging, pleading.

They burst through the front door and stumbled into the misty night, gasping for air. Behind them, Graymoor House stood silent and unyielding, its whispers now distant, almost mournful.

Melissa looked back one last time, her face pale. 'They wanted us to find him,' she whispered.

Jared nodded, gripping her hand. 'But we’re not going back.'

The whispers continued, echoing through the fog, waiting for the next to enter, to listen, to uncover what lay hidden beneath the shadows of Black Hollow.

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