The Whispering Veil
Some Secrets Should Remain Unseen

On the outskirts of a forgotten town lay the crumbling remains of an old manor known as Blackthorn House. Locals whispered of its curse: anyone who stepped inside would never be the same again. Some said you could hear the house breathe, others claimed the shadows had lives of their own. But the most chilling tale was of the Veil—a heavy, moth-eaten curtain in the manor’s parlor that no one dared touch.
One stormy evening, Clara—a skeptic and amateur urban explorer—arrived at the manor. Fueled by an insatiable curiosity and dismissive of local superstitions, she had one goal: to uncover the secrets of Blackthorn House. Armed with a flashlight and a camera, she pushed open the groaning wooden doors, letting the scent of mildew and decay wash over her.
The house was eerily silent except for the occasional creak, as though the building was adjusting its bones to accommodate her presence. Her flashlight beam swept across cobweb-strewn furniture, peeling wallpaper, and broken chandeliers. But Clara wasn’t here for relics of the mundane—she was here for the Veil.
In the parlor, she found it. The curtain hung unnaturally, its blackened fabric faintly glistening as though wet. Oddly, the room behind the curtain appeared brighter than the rest of the house, the light casting ominous shadows that danced on the walls. Something pulsed in her chest, a mix of dread and fascination.
Clara reached out, her fingers grazing the fabric. It felt impossibly cold. As her hand pulled the Veil aside, the room beyond revealed itself—a mirror of the parlor she stood in, but pristine and glowing with an ethereal light. On the far wall, an ornate mirror reflected her wide-eyed face, but something was wrong. The Clara in the mirror wore a twisted grin that didn’t belong to her.
Before she could react, the mirror-Clara stepped forward, through the glass, and into the room.
The real Clara stumbled backward, her flashlight falling to the ground. The impostor tilted its head and smiled wider, its teeth unnaturally sharp. “I’ve been waiting for you,” it purred, its voice a distorted echo of Clara's own.
Paralyzed, Clara could only watch as the impostor reached out, cold fingers grazing her cheek. “Thank you for freeing me. You’ll love it on the other side.”
Before Clara could scream, the impostor shoved her through the Veil. Cold enveloped her, followed by darkness so dense it smothered her senses. When she opened her eyes, she was back in the parlor—but everything had changed. The room was no longer glowing; it was decayed, the furniture rotting and collapsing under unseen weight. The air felt heavy, suffocating.
Clara ran to the mirror, desperate to return. On the other side, she saw the impostor adjusting her hair and waving gleefully. “I’ll take good care of your life,” it said, its voice muffled through the glass. “You enjoy mine.”
Clara’s surroundings darkened further as grotesque figures emerged from the shadows—spectral beings with hollow eyes and crooked smiles. They whispered incomprehensible words, but one thing was clear: Clara had entered a prison of forgotten souls, all ensnared by the Veil.
The next morning, a local boy passing by the manor claimed to see movement in the parlor window. When asked what he saw, he said, “A woman, smiling like she just heard the funniest joke.”
Inside, Clara’s flashlight lay discarded on the dusty floor, its beam still faintly illuminating the base of the Veil. And beyond it, faint laughter echoed—laughter that didn’t belong in this world.
About the Creator
Bryan Wafula
Storyteller focused on current events and cultural dynamics. I explore global narratives, challenging media perspectives, advocating for humanitarian safety, and highlighting resilient voices—particularly in conflict zones.
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Comments (2)
God! I still can't control my nerves... It's splendid 😩 How could you write such a thing that can grab me and push me as if I were a part of this horror scene myself 😵👌 This can be a great start for a movie named "THE OTHER SIDE" You nailed it, MAN!
That's amazing Bryan