The Whispering Shadows
Some voices are better left unheard…

The old house at the end of Hollow Street had stood abandoned for nearly fifty years. Its windows were cracked like spider webs, its roof sagged under the weight of forgotten years, and the wind that passed through its broken walls always carried whispers faint, chilling, and disturbingly human.
The locals called it The Gray Widow’s House. They said a woman had once lived there, waiting for her husband who never returned from war. When hope finally died, she sealed every window and door and disappeared inside. No one saw her again, but sometimes, people swore they saw her shadow through the curtains, pacing endlessly.
No one in the small town went near it not at night, not even on a dare.
But Amina, a 26-year-old photographer, wasn’t like the others. She had recently moved to town, working on a photo series titled “Forgotten Corners.” She didn’t believe in ghosts or curses; she believed in beauty hidden behind decay.
So one late afternoon, camera in hand, she walked up the overgrown path leading to the house. The autumn sky was painted in bruised shades of purple and orange. The air smelled like wet earth and rust.
The gate creaked open with a groan that made her heart flutter. She smiled nervously. “Old metal,” she whispered to herself, trying to sound braver than she felt.
When she reached the front door, she noticed faint scratch marks near the handle as if someone had tried to claw their way out.
Her fingers hesitated before she turned the knob. The door opened slowly, exhaling a wave of cold air that smelled of mold and dust.
“Hello?” she called out, her voice echoing off the walls.
Silence.
Amina stepped inside. The house seemed frozen in time furniture covered in white sheets, wallpaper peeling like old skin, and a large mirror hanging crooked on the wall.
She lifted her camera and clicked.
Flash.
The light bounced off the mirror. When she looked at the photo, her breath caught in her throat. Behind her reflection stood a dark figure, tall and blurry, its face twisted in shadow.
Her pulse raced. She spun around nothing there.
“It’s just the light,” she muttered, shaking her head. “Just dust and bad angles.”
But then she heard it.
A faint whisper.
Right beside her ear.
“Leave… before they wake.”

Amina froze. The whisper was low but distinct a woman’s voice. She turned slowly. The hallway was empty, but the air felt heavier, thicker.
She tried to laugh it off, forcing herself to keep moving. “This will make a great story,” she said softly. Her camera clicked again flash after flash as she explored the corridor.
Then, on one of the photos, she noticed something strange.
A child’s handprint on the wall.
But when she looked up, the wall was clean.
Her heart hammered. She could hear faint dragging sounds from upstairs like footsteps or something being pulled. Every instinct told her to leave, but curiosity pinned her feet to the floor.
She climbed the staircase slowly, every step creaking like a cry. At the top was a long hallway lined with doors. One was slightly open, light flickering inside.
Amina pushed it gently. Inside was a child’s bedroom, perfectly preserved a small bed, a cracked dollhouse, and drawings pinned to the wall. She took a photo.
Flash.
In the brief light, she saw shadows standing behind her in the reflection of the window four of them. A family.
She gasped and stumbled backward. “Who’s there?!” she shouted.
No reply. Only whispers now dozens of them, swirling around her.
“Amina… stay…”
“Join us…”
“Help her remember…”
She covered her ears, trembling. The voices grew louder, and the mirror in front of her began to ripple like water. Through the glass, she saw faces pale, lifeless, watching her from the other side.
Her flashlight flickered. Something cold brushed against her shoulder.
She turned and saw her own reflection still standing in the mirror but it didn’t move with her.
The reflection smiled.
Amina screamed and ran toward the stairs, but the door below slammed shut with a deafening bang. The whispers turned to cries.
The camera fell from her hands, still flashing at random intervals, each flash revealing fleeting glimpses of twisted shapes and hollow faces closing in on her.
She stumbled backward, hitting the floor hard. On the ground beside her was an old photograph a family of four standing proudly in front of the same house. Their faces were scratched out.
On the back, in faded ink, were the words:
“The house remembers.”
The final flash from her camera illuminated the mirror once more and her reflection stepped out of it.
The next morning, the locals found the front door wide open. Inside, everything was covered in a new layer of dust, as if untouched for years.
Amina’s camera lay in the hallway, still clicking, battery somehow alive.
When they checked the memory card, the photos showed the house, room by room until the final image.
It was a picture of Amina standing at the window, smiling faintly. But outside the window, the reflection of the house was gone.
In its place was another face the face of the Gray Widow, smiling back.
⚰️ Moral:
Curiosity can open doors that were never meant to be opened. Some stories and some houses never forget who entered them.

About the Creator
Asghar ali awan
I'm Asghar ali awan
"Senior storyteller passionate about crafting timeless tales with powerful morals. Every story I create carries a deep lesson, inspiring readers to reflect and grow ,I strive to leave a lasting impact through words".


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