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The Whispering Shadows: Jinn in the Attic

Some whispers echo louder than screams—especially when they come from the attic.

By Noman AfridiPublished 8 months ago 3 min read
He thought the house was empty. But something was waiting above, and it had been whispering his name for years.

The first thing Rehan noticed about his grandfather’s house was how it breathed. Not literally, of course—but every wooden creak, every subtle groan of the walls, sounded like the house exhaling.

After the passing of his grandfather, Rehan inherited the old colonial structure at the edge of a long-forgotten village. A perfect retreat for writing, he had thought. Quiet. Isolated. A place where stories could come alive.

But he didn’t know that one already had.

The attic had been sealed. Not locked—sealed. Ropes of black cloth tied into complex knots, symbols drawn in what looked like dry blood on the wood, and a chilling scent of burnt something. He laughed nervously the first time he saw it.

"Grandpa was into weird stuff."

The villagers had been cryptic. An old woman had grabbed his wrist at the corner store.

“Don’t go to the top. He trapped something. He died before sealing it forever.”

Rehan smiled politely and walked away. Superstition, he thought.

But on the third night, he heard it.

A whisper. Faint. From the attic.

At first, it was a name.

“Rehan...”

He jolted awake.

It came again the next night. Clearer. Closer.

“Rehan... I remember you.”

Each whisper scraped his mind like fingernails on a chalkboard. He searched for logical explanations—wind, rodents, pipes. But none made sense.

Finally, on the seventh night, he snapped.

Armed with a crowbar and flashlight, he tore down the ropes and symbols and yanked the attic door open.

What he saw was... nothing.

Just dust, broken furniture, old books—and something that resembled a cage. Small. Made of iron and bone. Burn marks in a circle.

As he stepped inside, the door behind him slammed shut.

And the whisper turned into breathing.

“Welcome back... child of betrayal.”

He turned—and there it was.

A jinn.

Not fully formed. Its body shimmered like mist, but its eyes glowed—two pits of red flame. It hovered above the ground, face shifting between human and something far older, far darker.

Rehan fell backward. “What are you?”

“You know me. Your grandfather made me... his servant. But he betrayed the oath. And so did you.”

“I didn’t do anything!”

“You broke the seal,” it growled, “That was enough.”

The room went cold. His flashlight died. Darkness swallowed everything but those burning eyes.

Rehan crawled back, chanting anything he could remember from his childhood. Verses his grandmother used to whisper. But the jinn only smiled.

“That won’t help you. Your blood is bound.”

Then it vanished.

The next day, Rehan tried to leave. His car wouldn't start. His phone showed no signal. Even the roads seemed to curve back to the house.

He was trapped.

And the attic whispered louder now. Sometimes laughter. Sometimes screams.

In desperation, he began reading his grandfather’s old books—grimy, handwritten journals filled with rituals, signs, and warnings.

He learned the truth.

His grandfather had captured the jinn in a rage of revenge. The creature had once haunted the village, stealing children. Rehan’s uncle had been one of them. In grief, his grandfather summoned it—not to banish it, but to bind it.

But binding a jinn requires blood. His own blood. And when he failed to sacrifice completely, the jinn was only partially sealed. Its revenge was merely... delayed.

Until Rehan came.

The journal offered one solution: finish the binding. Complete the sacrifice.

Rehan couldn’t understand what it meant—until he saw the final page.

“Only the willing blood of a bloodline can end the pact.”

He stood before a mirror. The jinn appeared behind him.

“You see now,” it whispered, “You must finish what he started.”

“I won’t kill myself for you.”

“You won’t have to. The house will.”

And it did.

That night, the walls moved. The floorboards snapped. Furniture flew. The very structure came alive. The jinn didn't need to attack—the house itself was its vessel.

Rehan ran to the attic, clutching the last page of the journal. There, he redrew the symbols, poured his blood onto the bones, and began chanting.

The house screamed. Windows shattered. The jinn appeared—writhing in pain, trying to stop him.

“You cannot bind what is already free!”

But Rehan did not stop.

As the final verse left his lips, the jinn was pulled into the circle. It screeched—louder than thunder—before vanishing in a burst of light and ash.

Silence.

And then... the house breathed no more.

In the morning, Rehan walked out. The car started. The phone buzzed. The roads led away.

He left the house behind.

But in the rearview mirror, just as he turned the last corner, the attic window stood open.

And someone was whispering his name again.

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About the Creator

Noman Afridi

I’m Noman Afridi — welcome, all friends! I write horror & thought-provoking stories: mysteries of the unseen, real reflections, and emotional truths. With sincerity in every word. InshaAllah.

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