The Watcher Beneath
Not every house is a home. Some are prisons, and some hold something far worse.
The town of Eldridge had long since fallen out of favor. Situated deep in the valley, it was the kind of place most people would drive through without ever thinking twice. A place forgotten by time—until Henry Mitchell moved there.
Henry, a writer by profession, was searching for inspiration. The noise of the city had stifled his creativity, and he needed solitude, a retreat from the constant buzz of modern life. When he found the old house at the edge of town, its decaying walls and towering iron gates called to him. It was exactly what he needed—isolated, abandoned, and filled with the promise of mystery.
The first time he saw the house, it struck him as eerie. Its windows were clouded with years of neglect, the roof sagging under the weight of time. Yet something about it compelled him to buy it. A whisper, perhaps, from the land itself—a call to write the stories hidden within its walls.
He was warned, of course. The townspeople gave him strange looks when he bought the house, murmuring in hushed tones about "the Watcher." They told him to leave it alone, but Henry had heard it all before. People always believed in ghosts and things that went bump in the night, but he was a man of logic. Nothing could deter him from his goal.
The first few nights were uneventful, peaceful even. He spent his days exploring the house, taking notes, and filling pages with descriptions of his surroundings. But it wasn’t long before things began to change.
It started with sounds—a faint tapping on the windows at night. Henry would wake from a deep sleep, the noise jarring him from his dreams, only to find the window untouched. He would brush it off as the wind, a branch perhaps brushing against the glass.
But then, the tapping grew more insistent, louder, as if something—or someone—was trying to get in.
One night, he finally decided to investigate. Grabbing a flashlight, he made his way to the living room, where the tapping seemed to be coming from the large, front-facing window. As he peered out into the darkness, there was nothing. The yard was still, the trees unmoving. Yet, the tapping continued, louder now, as if coming from just beyond the window.
Henry’s heart raced. He turned the flashlight back toward the glass, his breath fogging up the window as he strained to see something, anything, moving in the shadows. His pulse quickened when, for just a split second, he saw it—a dark figure standing just beyond the glass, staring in. It had no face, just a hollow darkness where its features should have been, but it was watching him, its presence pressing against the window like a weight.
Frozen with terror, Henry stepped back, his flashlight trembling in his hand. The tapping stopped, but the figure remained, its empty eyes locked on him. The room felt colder, the air thicker, as though the walls themselves were closing in on him.
He slammed the shutters closed, but the feeling lingered. The house felt different now, heavier, as if it were alive, breathing in the dark. For the first time since moving in, Henry felt trapped.
The nights grew worse. Every time he lay in bed, he could feel eyes on him—always watching. It wasn’t just the tapping anymore. At night, he would hear footsteps—slow, deliberate, moving through the hallways. He would get up, flashlight in hand, but there would be nothing—only the echo of his own breath and the silence that followed.
Henry began to lose track of time. He didn’t sleep for days, unable to rest with the oppressive presence hanging over him. Every time he thought he was alone, the whispers began—the soft, unintelligible words drifting through the house, seeming to come from every direction. He could feel them in the corners of the rooms, behind the walls, curling into his ears when he least expected it.
Then, one morning, the figure appeared again.
This time, it wasn’t outside. It was inside.
Henry awoke to find the figure standing at the foot of his bed, its hollow eyes fixed on him. He tried to scream, but no sound came from his mouth. The figure moved closer, its presence suffocating, a cold void that seemed to drain the warmth from the room.
He tried to run, but his legs wouldn’t move. His body felt heavy, as though the air itself had turned to lead. The figure reached out, its long, shadowed fingers grazing his skin. The touch was cold, like ice against his flesh, sending a shock of fear through him.
“You should have left,” a voice whispered in his ear—a voice that sounded like the wind itself, hollow and distant. “Now, you belong to the house.”
As Henry’s vision blurred, he heard a creak behind him, followed by the sound of a door slowly closing. He turned to see that the door to his study had shut. The house was alive, and it had taken him. There was no escape.
The last thing Henry felt before the darkness took him was the pressure against his chest—an unbearable weight that seemed to press him into the floor. The Watcher, a figure that had never belonged to this world, had finally claimed him. The house had its new prisoner.
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Parth Bharatvanshi
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