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The Warning Ignored

The only words written on the paper...Don't open the door.

By Shannon BurgerPublished about a year ago 1 min read

There was only one rule: don’t open the door. Emily flipped the paper over to find the other side was blank; it was the rental agreement for her room.

The owner pointed out the door before he left.

It stood at the end of the dark hallway; ancient wood swollen from years of neglect. The paint was peeling, showing layers of different colors, and a rusty chain hung loosely across it, as if an afterthought.

Emily had been told by the old man who rented her the room that the door must stay shut, no matter what she heard or saw. But now, she was alone, and strange things had begun.

First, whispers curled around her ears like smoke, that drew her closer. Faint voices crying out for help, pleading to get them out of the cold. She put her ear to the door. The cries grew more desperate, “Help us! Get us out!”

Emily’s breath hitched as she drew back. Then knocking—soft at first, then progressively harder until it was pounding from inside her head.

She wanted to run for her room and forget it, to do what the paper in her hand told her. But her curiosity clawed at her resolve. What if someone was trapped inside?

She gripped the doorknob. It was cold. The moment she turned it, the door flew open, revealing only darkness within. The air rushed out, frigid and sharp, carrying a smell of decay that clawed at her throat. The whispers turned to laughter, low and cruel.

Then a force, stronger than anything living, pulled her into the dark. As she disappeared into the void, the door slammed shut behind her, sealing the darkness tight.

The hallway fell silent. The only thing left behind was the paper.

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  • Karen Cuozzoabout a year ago

    I enjoyed this one. Gave me chills.

  • David Williamsabout a year ago

    I really enjoyed this, great job!

  • Tina D'Angeloabout a year ago

    Nicely done!!

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